DuMorte, I came at you like

When you're a newblette to comicking and translating your ideas on paper don't come out quite as you'd imagined

Can I say maybe baby?

Practicing the male form sooo.....

it was in the name of art...

Colorado

Hi everyone

It's me again. I made the char Wren once upon a time not too long ago. For this invitational I brought a new contender, though.

Meet...

Dawa





Dawa is an ancient bear spirit that was once a human shaman in what is now the border of Mongolia and Russia. Legend has it that Dawa earned her bear form after sacrificing herself for a righteous leader. The bear spirit that was guiding her to the afterlife instead gave her his immortal life instead so that she may continue to be a mighty warrior for noble causes in the world. That is what she did for many years until she disappeared one day, never to be seen again by those who knew her.

Now, many centuries later, she lives in Void City making money as a fortune teller. Her new aim is to spawn many noble werebabies so that they can carry on her legacy the day she finally disappears from this world for good.

Dawa can transform into her bear form at will. She is gifted with various psychic abilities, as well, including telepathy, enhanced memory, clairvoyance, aura reading, hypnosis, telekinesis, astral projection, psychic energy manipulation and psychic constructs. She can also alter her own physical mass to be tangible or not, and she can teleport as far as her vision allows.

Her personality is vibrant. Her free-spirited nature keeps her from holding anything back. She is mostly happy and energetic but if she's sad or angry, it will be very plain to those around her. Other words to describe her are self-assured, intuitive, maternal, and fierce.

Nope, she's still coming first

Thanks, Kozi! :3 How could I not give glass shoes to a girl who manipulates glass?

Heyyy yeeeesss thanks for the critiques, guys!!

Pocketmouse: yes, thanks! I agree with your niggles. My intention was to keep the speech bubbles in the background behind her because she's tuning the guy out, but you gave me another idea actually~

Rikun: Addressing your first comment, I knew that part might get a little confused, it's supposed to read left down then right down. I'll see how I can have that flow a little better. Also, I put the guy on the left because he sees Wren first, then the girl looks to see what the guy is looking at. So it's happening in order from left to right. But that's not really essential to the story that much so i'll consider switching those panels. Thanks for all the input!

Roflqu: Ooh, I get what you're saying about the dude, he's supposed to be acting shady but I like your idea to have him sit next to her. That's what I'm gonna do. 

I'll be drawing these over, this is my first draft to get the layout how i want it.

Lol, thanks for the warm (pun) welcome everyone.

Hi everyone,

I've been a quiet creeper on this site for a while now, but figured I'd introduce myself since I plan to post a character or two up soon. I'm a long-time fine arts student, into a lot of things from comic books to video games to fashion to music to sports... or I'm a soot ball. You decide.