Lockjaw, short, funny ending, but a little expected.
Ancelin, that was a freakin\' riot, laughs on every page, that was one of the funnier battles I\'ve read in a while, if I could have given you an \'A+\' for entertainment, I would have... But I can\'t, you\'ll just have to settle for an \'A\' and a lovely fruit basket with your choice of seasonal delights.
Queen Void vs. Lockjaw
Critiques & Comments
# 17
Posted:
Sep 29 2006, 01:35 AM
# 16
Posted:
Sep 28 2006, 10:12 PM
Haha, that lightsource thing is dead on. I realized about halfway through page 5 that I had forgotten to take that into consideration. It will definitely be a focus for me in the future.
And, eh, tekkieman *cough*, I blame most of that on Ancelin having a more complicated design than the other two, but mostly I just haven\'t drawn enough male characters lol. Thanks for the advice.
Also, if you plan to battle me in less than two years\' time, you have to get a char in immediately :\\
And, eh, tekkieman *cough*, I blame most of that on Ancelin having a more complicated design than the other two, but mostly I just haven\'t drawn enough male characters lol. Thanks for the advice.
Also, if you plan to battle me in less than two years\' time, you have to get a char in immediately :\\
# 15
Posted:
Sep 27 2006, 07:06 PM
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# 14
Posted:
Sep 27 2006, 04:36 PM
bobo - not bad. good quality, and the story was pretty interesting. can\'t wait to see more fights from you :3
red - uuhhh.....your style reminds me a lot of kim possible 8[ at least, when you draw girls. it was a cute short story, but i think everyone else already said what to improve on.
red - uuhhh.....your style reminds me a lot of kim possible 8[ at least, when you draw girls. it was a cute short story, but i think everyone else already said what to improve on.
# 13
Posted:
Sep 27 2006, 03:41 PM
hahahah the lockjaw part was very short and ilarious at the same time... funny. and Ancelin\'s was incredible.. i like the way you turn around a history after i think i know what just gonna happen.
# 12
Posted:
Sep 27 2006, 03:31 AM
Bobski, you\'re definitely getting much better--but start taking your time on the other people man! Ancelin almost always looked great, but Lockjaw and the other guys seemed to lack the detail Ancelin had. You could have added stuff to them, even if their design sheet didn\'t call for it--like muscle tone
If I evar get around to making a fighter, be ready; I shall be teh pwnage.
--Dono
If I evar get around to making a fighter, be ready; I shall be teh pwnage.
--Dono
# 11
Posted:
Sep 27 2006, 03:13 AM
Heh, I see Jelly-Jam got drank again. That\'s not going to end well for anyone involved.
Bobo: your fight was great. Good quality and it was fun to read. I can\'t think of anything really negative about it.
Red2z: not very good. The quality seemed extremely poor and the writing seemed dull. I\'d suggest adding more detail and using more background elements and perspective in the future.
Bobo: your fight was great. Good quality and it was fun to read. I can\'t think of anything really negative about it.
Red2z: not very good. The quality seemed extremely poor and the writing seemed dull. I\'d suggest adding more detail and using more background elements and perspective in the future.
# 10
Posted:
Sep 26 2006, 10:23 PM
Bobo-loved the fight, was extremely entertaining, you did a great job on the facial expressions. The coloring was nice but I think it would have been a lot better if the light source was just a little more clear.
red2z-I understand this time around you had problems time wise, but showing what you had was better than nothing. I think it would have been interesting to show how on earth he talks or makes out with that big lock on his face.
red2z-I understand this time around you had problems time wise, but showing what you had was better than nothing. I think it would have been interesting to show how on earth he talks or makes out with that big lock on his face.
# 9
Posted:
Sep 26 2006, 08:56 PM
I didn\'t feel guilty.
# 8
Posted:
Sep 26 2006, 07:02 PM
My votes go to Bobo quality-wise....but Red\'s entry made me laugh...even though I felt really, really guilty about it afterwards. haha
Cute fight, you two.
Cute fight, you two.
# 7
Posted:
Sep 26 2006, 06:38 PM
bobo......I lol\'d quite a few times. there for I\'m biast and my votes go to you >:]
# 6
Posted:
Sep 25 2006, 11:56 PM
i lost too much time on school and work so i apologize now for the comic and can only promise better for next time, but i wanted to upload what i had instead of nothing
# 5
Posted:
Sep 19 2006, 07:23 PM
I wanna eat my mathbook....
# 4
Posted:
Sep 12 2006, 04:04 PM
Page one is almost complete. Yes, powerz, I am definitely outshining any of my past work with this one. This is gonna rock!
# 3
Posted:
Sep 12 2006, 02:07 PM
...my morals are worried about this...but what does that thing know? MAKES THIS GOOD YOU TWO!
# 2
Posted:
Sep 11 2006, 08:07 PM
I am so happy right now.
# 1
Posted:
Sep 11 2006, 02:02 PM
Thanks for accepting; this is gonna be sweet!
Regular Match
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2 weeks
Ended:
Oct 3rd, 2006
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42
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1573
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Ancelin, I really didn\'t like the airbrushed coloring, but hey, your comic was ultra easy to read. Spatious, clear, and colorful. That made it much more fun for a quick read. Kudos.