as always mr pr youve done an amazing job telling the story and this is a spectacular way to hype up a battle, cute silly and full of character im glad I got to read it!

This really could have used some colour or shading, it feels so empty T_T and I agree with the comments that theres more you could do with the inking to vary the line wight, make foreground elements pop out more and backgrounds recede. I did get a kick out of the story though! Cassidy comics are delightfully cartoony! This had excellent use of cameos and is setting up a really interesting new arc for her that you got me invested in! Keep going, but take a little more care with your art so it doesnt look so rushed! If a BB deadline is getting close and you cant finish on time, theres no penalty to cancel it!

I liked the sparse use of color, but I wish there had been bxw shading or something else going on with it. I know that the weather was a big issue though. Knowing more about this character through this BB has been great. I absolutely want to know more. Especially setting the course for Kurt after this. Very nice. The skeleton continuing to stand after that explosion gave me a good laugh.

I've gotta go back and read more about this coolness!

I'm actually pretty invested in this storyline now! All the cameos were great, but I'd really recommend putting some more time into consciously varying your line width (I know you have the ability now!) and keeping characters solidly attached to the background. Like, in the first panel of page 6, you've got a nice fish eye thing going on, but Chuck is kind of just slapped on.

Interesting multidimensional story, Rick & Morty prepared me for this! I thought the sequence with all the evildoers getting done in was hilarious as was the skeleton gag at the end. I would have rather you waited to submit this though so you could add full color to this.. the pages beg to be filled up

oh ho! Setting Cassidy up for some bigger adventures down the line, niiiiice~  
Not to poke holes in a comic that's more setting up the future, but you might want to work on keeping the panel borders widths consistent. Them getting wider or thinner as the comic progresses, especially within a single page, can throw off a flow. Same goes for word bubbles crossing panels. While sometimes it's necessary last minute, try to compose the panels so the whole statement fits within the panel it came from. Butting the edges of bubbles with panels can cause tangents.

Skeleton's face at the end was hilarious. heh. it feels like he'd be flipping them off if he still had hands.

Comic's finally done. Ended up rushing up some parts and dialogue (and trying to get the number of characters to interact), but whew. I finally took care of this chapter.

EDIT: Hm... I forgot to light the fuse on PG10. Oh well! Too late for that!

The hurricane will come soon and the lights will be out in a while. I'm not so sure when the lights will go back but I'll be having to make my comic into a traditional sketch format. Hope I finish it in time! O.O

EDIT: AH... won't be able to finish coloring this... I'll be having to give this the lineart treatment ;-;

i anticipate strong foundations.