Majikura: *sigh* you just cannot draw a single character on model for the entire comic. This is most apparent on the knight's pauldrons that keep changing shape and onion princess's inconsitient face. You think by now you'd learn how to control your damn body structures.
Evi: I should not have won this. If month of the dead happens, I am hunting you down.
Bullet Princess vs. Onion Princess
Critiques & Comments
# 14
Posted:
Aug 19 2013, 06:23 PM
# 13
Posted:
Aug 9 2013, 10:51 AM
Majikura -
Alot of my critique is just gonna be that the comic looks rushed, and it's not up to your usual standards. The backgrounds look they were thrown in really quick, the line quality dips in a way I'm totally not used to seeing in your stuff (it's normally great looking), and the colour isn't really complimenting the work. I think it's amazing you were able to do so much while sick, and I think you could've just done the comic in black and white to give yourself more time on the line art. You're so good/comfortable with BnW stuff that I'm sure it would've looked polished and complete.
I only get regular hand pain myself, so I can't imagine trying to deal with carpal tunnel when I'm on a deadline. You're a strait up warrior dude!
Evi -
Ahhhh, now I have to wait longer for Onion Princess comics noooooooooo. I need more before I start eating raw onions whole to stave off the shakes!
Alot of my critique is just gonna be that the comic looks rushed, and it's not up to your usual standards. The backgrounds look they were thrown in really quick, the line quality dips in a way I'm totally not used to seeing in your stuff (it's normally great looking), and the colour isn't really complimenting the work. I think it's amazing you were able to do so much while sick, and I think you could've just done the comic in black and white to give yourself more time on the line art. You're so good/comfortable with BnW stuff that I'm sure it would've looked polished and complete.
I only get regular hand pain myself, so I can't imagine trying to deal with carpal tunnel when I'm on a deadline. You're a strait up warrior dude!
Evi -
Ahhhh, now I have to wait longer for Onion Princess comics noooooooooo. I need more before I start eating raw onions whole to stave off the shakes!
# 12
Posted:
Aug 8 2013, 06:58 PM
aw Evi, you toy with my heart! that one page is so epic and I want more! I hope you do upload the rest because I want to see! Kura, I also enjoy the tabletop aspect of yours, its clever and informative! I like the White Princess, I'm glad she gets a place in your story but I guess I've made it clear I'm a big fan of zombies and ghosts XD a good action packed story, and your depiction of Onion Princess is just precious, what a cutie lol! this looks like its not done either, so I cant wait to see the new developments now that Bullet Princess is on the scene!
# 11
Posted:
Aug 6 2013, 08:32 PM
I really love the table top aspect of your story Kura, just the way that it's integrated without skipping over any bits, it's not just for show. The appropriation of Onion Princess into your Bullet Princess storyline is pretty sweet, too. It'll be really interesting to see how you treat other, non-princess, characters in this world you've built up.
Eviiiiiiiiiiii. Sad ): That first page was looking phenomenal, I look forward to seeing it in a BB!
Eviiiiiiiiiiii. Sad ): That first page was looking phenomenal, I look forward to seeing it in a BB!
# 10
Posted:
Aug 5 2013, 09:40 PM
sorry. had to leave it as a cliffhanger because i got sick.
# 9
Posted:
Aug 5 2013, 07:05 PM
Yikes I should have listened to my gut and not have decided to take this battle while on holiday. Friends and family were more distracting than I thought. I'll upload what I have and finish the rest as BB... Sorry everyone.
# 8
Posted:
Jul 21 2013, 02:05 AM
extending. because carpal tunnel.
# 7
Posted:
Jul 18 2013, 11:24 AM
Remember you can always make BB's with your dead character Evi! If you don't want to stop telling her story, you can totally finish that way! I know I can't get enough Onion Princess!
# 6
Posted:
Jul 18 2013, 11:22 AM
Ok, then i said nothing XD
# 5
Posted:
Jul 18 2013, 11:21 AM
The battle started before Onion Princess died.
# 4
Posted:
Jul 18 2013, 11:19 AM
Wait... again dead characters fighting?
# 3
Posted:
Jul 17 2013, 02:45 AM
YAYY!!
# 2
Posted:
Jul 15 2013, 07:51 AM
Ohh! My dreams of more Onion Princess are coming true!
# 1
Posted:
Jul 15 2013, 06:21 AM
I was content on waiting for the month of the dead to use her again but one more fight wouldn't hurt hehe
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
2 weeks + 1
Ended:
Aug 12th, 2013
Votes Cast:
19
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2496
Winner:
Majikura
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and again I'm sorry for not being able to complete my side of the battle, I definitely don't mind a rematch. Hopefully I will have time during the month of the dead.