Fern..... that was truly great. I loved every second of it. The last panel, I am glad I wasn't drinking anything, that would have been everywhere. Excellent job, and congratulations!!!!!
le tendre Cyr Fred..... I hope everything gets better for you soon, and you can come back better than ever. Definitely know what the down times are like, so I can empathize. Best wishes to you!
Queen of VOID 2015: Finals / Lucy vs. Dr Calderwood
Critiques & Comments
# 14
Posted:
Apr 28 2015, 07:04 PM
# 13
Posted:
Apr 28 2015, 04:09 PM
FERN CONGRATULATIONS AHMAHGAWWW!
I'll definitely have to echo some of the comments you've already gotten on how your linework could be more diversified, so I wont get too into it. You know what's what and there's no sense drilling it home. I've definitely enjoyed the style you've implemented, but it certainly lend itself to being hard to translate visually. know winning by default can feel like a bit of a pratfall right at the finish line, but you've turned in some delightful and fantastic work throughout this tournament, so embrace it!
Ok ok- drunk Lucy. I can't. The smarmy smile and drunken shenanigans had me chuckling. I especially liked how you handled the drunken slurring in her word bubbles. I actually rubbed my hands together when she rang that doorbell after her final warning because Kars was gonna get down and dirty. You really know how you get readers excited for events that don't even involve your characters yet, and that's groovy.
Sidenote: can we talk about Calderwood's scary as F mug on page three? Who can handle that horror first thing in the morning?
Omigosh, page 7- queue all the cat woes! I get the feeling you not only captured Lucy's 'fuck it' attitude, but this may be art imitating life. I'm gonna guess you're a proud cat owner, haha! Also Lucy makes a horrible cat, I can't even XD It was amusing to watch her just turn into such a squatter. I also especially dug page 9 and your use of the flowery motif for when she spots the Dragons blood just as Bub saw when he first laid eyes on kitty Lucy on page 5. It really shows you thought through your short little tale and tied things together.
The payoff with human Lucy and hairy ass human Bub killed it. Couldn't of asked for a better ending to this tournament. XD Well done lady!
I'll definitely have to echo some of the comments you've already gotten on how your linework could be more diversified, so I wont get too into it. You know what's what and there's no sense drilling it home. I've definitely enjoyed the style you've implemented, but it certainly lend itself to being hard to translate visually. know winning by default can feel like a bit of a pratfall right at the finish line, but you've turned in some delightful and fantastic work throughout this tournament, so embrace it!
Ok ok- drunk Lucy. I can't. The smarmy smile and drunken shenanigans had me chuckling. I especially liked how you handled the drunken slurring in her word bubbles. I actually rubbed my hands together when she rang that doorbell after her final warning because Kars was gonna get down and dirty. You really know how you get readers excited for events that don't even involve your characters yet, and that's groovy.
Sidenote: can we talk about Calderwood's scary as F mug on page three? Who can handle that horror first thing in the morning?
Omigosh, page 7- queue all the cat woes! I get the feeling you not only captured Lucy's 'fuck it' attitude, but this may be art imitating life. I'm gonna guess you're a proud cat owner, haha! Also Lucy makes a horrible cat, I can't even XD It was amusing to watch her just turn into such a squatter. I also especially dug page 9 and your use of the flowery motif for when she spots the Dragons blood just as Bub saw when he first laid eyes on kitty Lucy on page 5. It really shows you thought through your short little tale and tied things together.
The payoff with human Lucy and hairy ass human Bub killed it. Couldn't of asked for a better ending to this tournament. XD Well done lady!
# 12
Posted:
Apr 25 2015, 01:17 PM
Fred ;____; i hope you're ok and things get massively better fast. Also i tried to pm u and couldnt cos ur inbox was full apparently.
Skulls - yes i think it is looser, it was really really rushed ugh. i actually realised at some point they were kinda blendy and fixed some but clearly not enough.
Skulls - yes i think it is looser, it was really really rushed ugh. i actually realised at some point they were kinda blendy and fixed some but clearly not enough.
# 11
Posted:
Apr 24 2015, 02:03 PM
Aww, I love your comic Fern, very cute!
I'm sorry for bailing like this, I just had the worst two weeks of my life- and still counting- but when my shit gets better, I'll totally owe you one :/
I'm sorry for bailing like this, I just had the worst two weeks of my life- and still counting- but when my shit gets better, I'll totally owe you one :/
# 10
Posted:
Apr 23 2015, 05:28 PM
Fern: I think it may just be me but your lines were much looser and less connected than what I've seen from you before, which isn't a bad thing! I like what you got here, but because of your line quality, your characters kind of just blended with the backgrounds which made it difficult for me to know what was going on sometimes. Not all the time, but still. Overall I digged the ending :'D
LeFred: Dunno what happened, but hope everything's ok!
LeFred: Dunno what happened, but hope everything's ok!
# 9
Posted:
Apr 23 2015, 11:06 AM
VERY well done.
I hope Fred is ok though.
I hope Fred is ok though.
# 8
Posted:
Apr 22 2015, 07:07 PM
ahh no! Fred what happened? D:
# 7
Posted:
Apr 22 2015, 09:39 AM
ALL HAIL QUEEN CALDERWOOD
# 6
Posted:
Apr 22 2015, 09:30 AM
Wow this is anti-climatic.
Dat comic tho. Gave me a good chuckle.
Dat comic tho. Gave me a good chuckle.
# 5
Posted:
Apr 21 2015, 09:31 AM
Uploaded etc. Even made thumbs and all that!
# 4
Posted:
Apr 8 2015, 10:08 PM
Where will Lucy's odyssey lead her!?
What strange new tale will Calderwood craft!?
TOO MUCH HYPE
What strange new tale will Calderwood craft!?
TOO MUCH HYPE
# 3
Posted:
Apr 8 2015, 02:55 PM
Yes! This will be great!
# 2
Posted:
Apr 8 2015, 11:02 AM
ITS THE FINAL COUNTDOWN!!
This is gonna be a battle for the ages, ladies. Make it spectacular!
This is gonna be a battle for the ages, ladies. Make it spectacular!
# 1
Posted:
Apr 8 2015, 08:16 AM
FIGHT FOR THE CROWN!!!!!!!!!
Tournament Match
Drawing Time:
2 weeks
Ended:
Apr 28th, 2015
Votes Cast:
14
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2005
Winner:
Fearn
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