Koosh and Lapin vs. Mystery Meat

Koosh and Lapin vs. Mystery Meat

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bl00chikin
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54 comments
# 5   Posted: Oct 18 2012, 11:56 AM
Yeah everything that neeners said basically, but i do enjoy the creativity that is the character of Mystery meat!

neens
Approval Committee
266 comments
# 4   Posted: Oct 17 2012, 01:55 PM
man, I dunno how to judge these one-weekers. any of my critiques just kinda boil down to "take more time" you know? and I understand that it's hardly anytime when yalls got stuff to do. basically no bgs on both sides, rushed looking drawings, stories seemed just kinda "eh" etc. I do appreciate that rofl's was inked, and that NGO had colors. though it didn't look like the scans were adjusted at all really, and not a big fan of the gradient bgs, but I guess it's a small step above white ones?? though there are some cute drawings in both as well. so.. I dunno! good job actually doing week battles I guess!

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1070 comments
# 3   Posted: Oct 16 2012, 08:06 PM
Julienya: what is that number referencing?
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WHAT INDEED

NothinGoinOn: I really like how you drew Mystery Meat here. I know we were both a bit strapped for time but I like what you did still. I think it's important to learn how to make your backgrounds and settings pop a little more, even if it's as sparse as we're doing. The color helps for sure, but I think even some bare minimum lines around it would help it pop even more.

That being said, I'm always down for a future rematch, good job.

Julz
Artist
411 comments
# 2   Posted: Oct 16 2012, 07:36 PM
what is that number referencing?

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1070 comments
# 1   Posted: Oct 8 2012, 02:56 AM
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Ended: Oct 22nd, 2012
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