Again.
Lexy\'s offering was fine...she didn\'t realise that three pages wasn\'t the cap. Her next one will be even better and this one isn\'t half bad either.

lexy just needs words... or somthing

sorry sorry I liked poe I ment lexy lol

Come on poe are you even trying?

Great job you two, both of your stories were well done.
Poe: I like your art, but personally your speech bubbles need alittle bit a work XD
Lexy: Your art blew me away, nice first battle. The ending could have used alittle work though, but not much

Berlin, your battle was interesting, but a bit cryptic. Try to balance mystery with at least a little exposition, so we at least understand the nature of the mystery.

Lexy, I LOVE Paige, but your unfinished batlle disappointed me. I was impressed with your version of the Bag Lady: you made her hot! However, you also made her wicked evil, which turned me off.

now I know what I need to work on, it seemed that I was so obsessed on working on panel layout and backgrounds due to previous crisism that I apparently wasn\'t paying attention to the entertainment part.
Yours was really entertaining :3 I look forward to reading your future battles.

Hmmm... I liked where Paige\'s story was going, but it seemed unfinished and slightly anticlimactic.  I did think the ending in Bag Lady\'s story was a pretty humorous way to finish a fight, though.

Any tutorials on an easy way to make out of panel ballons?

*eyebrow raise*

Paige\'s battle was a bit bland in all three departments- but I do love how you draw your characters. :3 Very cute~

Bag Lady was a little messy and some more speech bubbles instead of out-of-panel text would have been nice, but in all it was a fun read. Good job.

I love it.

\"Tasteless optimism\" Perfectly executed line. I really like what you\'ve done with the old girl. How is it we both thought Red would be a good cover?. . .heh.

Great job Lexy, wish I could vote for ya!

Great job, you very creative and original.
Very in character too, thanks for the challenge~

oh no, the cover\'ll be good, I promise you that :3

Whoops! Ya\'know I thought it was weird that when I posted it didn\'t tell me it was posted...heh...

Anyways, I think I might\'ve sent the wrong file type at first...but I\'m all uploaded now...fer sheezy.

I can\'t wait to read these. Only a couple of more hours.

I hope your cover doesn\'t drag you down b/c it was done \'fast\'. . . even though its pretty. . . we shall see ^^ (oooo I\'m foreboding, no?)

I just figured out today that a three page battle doesn\'t have to be three pages. so I threw in a cover real fast, but it\'s a pretty cover, so it\'ll do. >_< Oh well, I hope it\'s still good enough, I just didn\'t get to introduce some things I wanted to, like I really wanted to draw Veebeenee, shucks.

OO! Oo! I got my pages done! Bitch\'n no? It\'s only the four pages, but I have time to do a cover. I think this ended the way I wanted, noting of course there is some story in here missing that will be filled in on my up coming beyond the battle. When is that beyond the battle? Eh...couple weeks...Anyway, lotsa stuff here, sorry, excited that I don\'t have to default!

Heh...no I wasn\'t...I had the Ash battle done fer ever....no no...I just got busy with other stuff, but don\'t you worry, I\'ll have the four pages and cover!

I had more time, you were working on another battle so it\'s understandable. :3

Yer ahead of me...ack...so tired...though....I\'ll get two done and hopefully three pencilled tonight...tired...

yeah, Paige seems like a character that is\'nt likely to get into a battle :/
Got the first two pages done and halfway through page three.

your first battle isn\'t even over yet...so...this counts as a first battle as well. to me anyways.

Can\'t wait to see Paige in action. 7 more days *bounce*

Good luck to the both of yous ^^

It took a while, but I finally figured out why The Baglady is even fighting Paige...man...so I got page one done and page two penciled.

first battle! I\'m excited. Goodluck to the both of us~

This would be my second battle though....

Aha, this looks like it\'s gonna be a nice battle. I simply adore both these characters.. and seeing as how it\'s both their first battles... it could easily go either way. Neither of you better default!