sweet stuff dive, your line work is good! and your writing isn\'t half bad- \"point to\'em\" haha.
Also I have total admiration for your backgrounds. Page 4 shows your amazing skills with minimal line compositions. and the rest of the pages show your in the where with all in perspective.
You\'ll just have to chalange yourslef with color next!
and thanks pi- recently picked up the markers (prisma pack) and have realized they ain\'t half bad.

Dive: Try to fill more your panels, there were much blank space. Also try to add some shading or colors.

Stilled Life: Your art is nice and the ending was great! Fun, fun

Alright! Glad you got the battle uploaded, stilled_life!

Dive - really simplistic battle, but the jokes were pretty funny. Not a great fight, but definitely not terrible. I think you can do more, though, so don\'t let me down with your next battle.

Stilled_life - \"very cool art,\" was first thing I thought. I love how you can rock the traditional media, although there were some spots that were a little hard to decipher (ie panel 2 of page 1). Altogether, very nice work, keep it up.

I was wondering when someone was going to try drinking Jelly Jam.  Nice work Stilled.

Umm... I don\'t  think the midnight deadline is exact.

Dive i am so sorry, I never ever defualt, i find it way too disrespectful.
 I have worked so damn hard on this i am posting the rest on the fourm right now. (i have actually cried, i could post a picture but that would be to sad). i\'ll post the link to the page so you guys can see it all. i guess that is the way the chunks fly.

shit shit shit shit i hate my parents!!! they just got me home and i can\'t upload FUCK and it is frickin done but i can\'t upload it fast enough
god damn you are going to head hell fire and brim stone, and it is too late to ask for a fuckin extension... god i am going to cry cuz i worked so hard on this.

Whew, uploaded on time.  Didn\'t have enough time to color, but I know how long it takes to draw a battle now.  Good luck, Stilled.

Hey dive! Hope you been work\'in hard.

and uh- thanks Kura

Yay! This is gonna be good.

Nyeh-heh-heh.  Kyra is one o\' my favorites.  I\'m rootin for yah.

I totally just wet myself a little.