well synje is just sticking to pon\'s story. you can do whatever you want in yours man. different mythologies, different beliefs, you precieve characters diferently, im all for that dude, KEEP ROCKING

Yup, that\'s her alright.   She was really hungry. Muahahah!


Ok    you know how dumb it sound when you say someone killed  Grim Reaper?    You can\'t kill him.   Geez, I refused to go with the fact that she or someone killed Grim Reaper. It won\'t matter as much cause none of her story give in that fact.

The ship is set on sail, don\'t create object in the path.

Estrellas dad was grim and she killed him and took his place.

hey was that ...lotus pawning the guy in page one?
if it us...wuv ya

Pon... you should read some more mythology from many different places.  A lost of them have Grim Reaper and Death as two different people. In fact, I recall a myth story saying there\'s more than one Deaths, Thus, Angels of Death...

Anyways whatever....   let\'s say she\'s new at \"Death\" job now, she gotta work her way up to take Grim Reaper\'s place, ya dig?

im not sure if vincent read her new bio.. but she\'s now death the grim reaper..it still nicely done. and she would would not had been pushed around so easly EVER. remeber that budy.

I like these creepy mysterious plotlines... great BB!

ooh, the plot thickens...

great comic.

Maaaaaaaan, I wish I knew what was going on. That was freakin\' cool.  Some of your script was a little strangely placed, I had trouble following it occasionally, but otherwise, that was pretty righteous.  Poor Estrella, I would\'ve thought she\'d put up more of a fight.

yea  thanks guys, I don\'t expect this to be the best work yet.   I only expect myself to get better by each battles I go.

Yeah, I asked Pon. He said that he\'s making Estrella more of a NPC now.

color is the best thing here for sure. some of your panels are a little weak and hard to follow, but good reading overall. my biggest problem with it is the text - it\'s understandable, but hard to understand easily, and usually connects in no way to the images. strive for clarity above almost everything else. nice stuff mano.

aight, bro. besides what\'s already been said I think you really nailed down a good feeling with this.
now let\'s see some fights!

NICE NICE NICE

great stuff vince.
i hope you got pon's permission to use estrella. i like how you did her man. and the story with the gods, thats awesome too
the colors are great, bg a bit on the sloppy side. panels are cool, though the size of a panel should reflect the importance of whats its protraying. so keep that inmind
anyways
great stuff man
cant wait till we dance