Well, actually, *scratches head* This is a setup for further development and was, basically, the entire storyline. Due to some medical \'oopses\' on my part and a really STUPID oops that led to my requesting the extention, I had to rush  mine and I DO apologize to Neko for that. (I will never ever ever, even when high on meds or half awake, leave pages next to open cleaning fluid. Repeat... I will never ever ever....)

What we had WANTED to do was have the same circumstance told from two different views. Frank\'s of Scarlett... Scarlett\'s of Frank. Same situation, same things happening, but different views of them. Still, I wish it had come across better. *hangs head*

There\'s some good stuff in both battles. But honestly I expected a bit more D:
I know on the technical side of the issue you guys had stuff going on and sometimes, life happens. But I mean in terms of story and planning, the story felt like it stopped halfway ^_^\' Its a mistake I made too and Rabbit called me on it .
And well the two sides of the same story kind of thing is good and it could\'ve worked amazingly, but it kind of feels like both characters are narrating the same without much personal bias or a unique perspective. So other than a few remarks in narration here and there, it feels more like telling one side of the story, twice, in which case the story really doesn\'t stand to gain much. Then again that\'s just my opinion.

PD - If you wanna check out some awesome, multiple perspective narrative check out Mario Vargas Llosa\'s \"The Cubs\" or \"Conversation in the Cathedral\", who knows, you might like it :3

Interesting that you both told the same story - I didn\'t expect that.  I liked the motion in Neko\'s pencils, even if it was unfinished.  Very fluid motion.  I would\'ve liked to have seen more background use from both, but decent in general.  Keep it up

Agreed, very interesting try. DJ\'s pages faults are only on some confusing ones, like while they are fighting.

Kodi are ok, but have many \"empty spaces\".

Good job to both!

finally i see someone doing this, and ive been waiting for it. I loved that you guys told the same story from different points of view its something that i have wanted to try out but wasnt sure it would work
Thank you for the entertaining read

Submitted the pages via manager. D:

Pages sent to Wei. >_>

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this should be fun! last stretch girls, give it all you got!

Kotori has requested an extension....Deadline Extended by one week for both artists

Good luck to you both, i hope this battle will be good.....

.....Someone will leave with an \"L\".....

Artistic suicide here I come...

wow!  and another challenge for Scarlett.....

^_^  lets see her go 2/2?

Good luck both of you!

Monday: I had to out do cols dumb  comment, it wouldn\'t of been christain of me if i never.

Powerz: boooooooooooooooooooooooo

can scarlett tame frank the same why she tames most trouser snakes?

.....what?  he wears trousers and he\'s a snake :/

I wanna see them making babies