Speed Death Tournament 2006: Round 1 / Tea Cup vs. beta Model 06
Critiques & Comments
# 10
Posted:
Jun 22 2006, 01:18 AM
Wei, I would\'ve loved to see that in color, dude....
# 9
Posted:
Jun 22 2006, 12:56 AM
wei... if it weren\'t for the fact that you had to deal with another battle and posting all our stuff, i\'d ask what stopped you from finishing... if it had been finished, i know it would have been flat out awesome. thanks for at least turning something in. and thanks for all your hard work.
# 8
Posted:
Jun 22 2006, 12:23 AM
wow wie wow wie!
what chunky said pretty much covers all the bases.
great fight
i hope your not slacking on our fight!
what chunky said pretty much covers all the bases.
great fight
i hope your not slacking on our fight!
# 7
Posted:
Jun 21 2006, 06:17 PM
omg, it\'s the firsttime in days that i can really sit and take a look on void...
i\'m really really sorry, but even now i\'m still on a rush, no time for.. NOTHING...
sorry wei, really sorry
*starts running*
i\'m really really sorry, but even now i\'m still on a rush, no time for.. NOTHING...
sorry wei, really sorry
*starts running*
# 6
Posted:
Jun 21 2006, 05:43 PM
Saturday - Meh...there wasn\'t really a setup or intro...I think that killed a lot of this entry for me. Also, it ends just as quick as it begins. There was a lot of promise for your character but it just wasn\'t there...an all around \"Meh\"... Sorry. Your coloured enrty is helping your score. Also, your pannels are fairly large...but there was nothing but flat colour to fill them. If there were backgrounds I wouldn\'t feel as if there was so much wasted space.
A valiant effort, I\'m sure if the time-monster wasn\'t on your back, it would have been a better entry.
Wei - Tea Cup was creepy. I liked your version of Tea Cup better than Saturday\'s. The characters look good, but don\'t they always? They really are loosening up more, less stiff then how you used to draw.
The pannels and angles of the shots were kind of boring though. I don\'t like seeing two of the same shots in a row. I think that you definitely need try some more dynamic shots. The 2nd last pannel alone could have been an ecip scene if done with more gusto.
I am familiar with the constraint you\'ve had this week, but despite them, you put in a good entry. You the Man!
Wei gets the nod
A valiant effort, I\'m sure if the time-monster wasn\'t on your back, it would have been a better entry.
Wei - Tea Cup was creepy. I liked your version of Tea Cup better than Saturday\'s. The characters look good, but don\'t they always? They really are loosening up more, less stiff then how you used to draw.
The pannels and angles of the shots were kind of boring though. I don\'t like seeing two of the same shots in a row. I think that you definitely need try some more dynamic shots. The 2nd last pannel alone could have been an ecip scene if done with more gusto.
I am familiar with the constraint you\'ve had this week, but despite them, you put in a good entry. You the Man!
Wei gets the nod
# 5
Posted:
Jun 21 2006, 12:39 PM
Good battle guys, had to give Wei the vote, had more substance all around.
Wei you\'re a god for getting all this done as well as other battles and putting all this together for us. Your the shit.
Wei you\'re a god for getting all this done as well as other battles and putting all this together for us. Your the shit.
# 4
Posted:
Jun 17 2006, 09:24 PM
Hmmm... interesting match up. This should be good. Best of luck to you both.
JV
JV
# 3
Posted:
Jun 16 2006, 12:12 PM
Only four more days.... get moving NO DEFAULTS!!!
# 2
Posted:
Jun 13 2006, 11:32 PM
i see there\'s a new puppet for me...
really nice indeed
really nice indeed
# 1
Posted:
Jun 13 2006, 11:18 AM
target confirmed
Speed Death Tournament Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Jun 25th, 2006
Votes Cast:
55
Page Views:
2029
Winner:
Wei Ingnan
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I\'m glad people appreciated the effort I made on the story and focus on my opponent\'s character....if only I had been able to focus more on layout and actually drawing it more
Chunk, special thanks to you for taking the time to actually crit a bit.....i totally agree with what you said about the lack of visual dynamic.....
Mr. Saturday: it looks as though you had some time constraints yerself......if you had been able to spare a few more moments to spend on a few more pages/panels of set up and a bit more time on execution you would be kicking my sketchy ass right now....that last panel is nice
but your comic is all meat...you need to throw a full course meal at these guys...otherwise they come away hungry