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carole baskin?

SHIT! Sorry about the third page I'll probably have Toast add it later tonight. I've been gone since my birthday and lazy cause I couldn't make a good ending for it so when you see the shitty ending you'll see why. And thank the lot of you or the comments since this is the first time since my match with Dan and Carlo's Intro Story that I made a effort to draw backgrounds.

pisses me off! why dont u guys finish your battles!!!!

anyways
nice artwrok from Chao. i think rijin needs more practice. the panel style is totally confusing and leaves alot of whites. and u need BACKGROUNDS too, that alone takes off half the art vote. also ur dialogue could use some help, i know thast probably that hardest thing, and honestly i suck at that too so i have no advice... maybe read some comcis and see how characters interact with each other?

"OW! MY STOMACH! THE PAIN IS TOO MUCH!" Ahwww...*wipes tear* that's a classic.

I was expecting more of this fight, Rick, I cant even read your text so I didnt bother and Mike, I like your finished works, but it was okay overall ^.^

Replace "power" with "wang", and fight with love or make love, and rijin's side would be much better! "Now, show me your complete wang!"
"fine, you want to see my wang okay, but I hope you don't mind if it gets hot around here"

Sorry but I thought it felt like DBZ from the first page with all that power talk and hype about giving it your all, then Carlo goes super saian or something.

and... uhh... the other side isn't done. It's nice and all, but also not finito (no duh road!)... also Carlo has some crazy hand writing, the guy should really learn cursive

zato, thanks for ur comments on where i have to inprove, for the next battle with carlo, since i have to finish it, ill try to do a better still, my bad that ppl r going to be dissipointed on this battle, but like i said ill do a better job.thanks again

Rijin : You seem to have a good handle of arranging camera angles and such. All you need to do is fix...well, pretty much everything besides that. Your framework looks sloppy, anatomy and posing need work, and the dialogue is lazy (I recall "Holding back" and "giving your all" to be the most used lines in the whole comic). Then there's the predictability of the fight which is also a let-down.

Carlo : Killer penwork, excellent frame flow, and nice dialogue. What you might wanna do is vary your line weights between characters and background so the reader can differentiate between background and foreground objects. Then there's the fact that this fight isn't finished, but I'm giving you the points for putting up a stronger entry, even if it was short by a page.

Keep up the good work you two. ^^

so, what did either of you turn something in?!

Chao has an extension until the 21st

RTequesting an extension until my birthday August 26. Shit came up and now I'll be busy per usual. -_-;

Heh heh heh, either you submit a comic to this battle (a really kickarse comic that is) or Carlo takes your bandana. It's all up to you, ya know? (Sheesh, I'm acting like, Chao's evil minion or something 0_0 )

maybe a next character ill bring to void, but not rijin

noooooooo i work to hard on creating this character for him to lose anything thats on him

Carlo is going to have to confiscate Rijin's bandana if you lose Rick.

You'd better not punk out of this one Ricky! You've got 3 default losses, and your character is now a Class F man. If I were you I'd start drawing like the dickens to make up for it! Good luck both of you!