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Edge: Good effort, they look fine for sketches.

Sasa, while I like the shadows, I and I understand that it's supposed to be dark, I think you went a little overboard; the kind of darkness here it looks like all the lights of the city went out. We can't appreciate your drawings as well if they're in so much black with no reflections of any lights from the city save a few lights in the scene.

Good work everyone~

yeah there seems to be some bugs.... i just scored this and Threshers side is showing zero %....weird.

I was worried about what was going on until i saw MyHatsEatPeoples' comment. I never realized the forum had a layout for the site too.. wow..no wonder i couldnt see Threshers' comic!

Its been fun folks, and thanks for the opinions on it

Thresher: Bit disappointed here bro, you had 4 weeks to work on this - and that's plenty of time for a 5 page comic to look a lot tidier and less rushed then this! Honestly it looks like you drew this in a couple of days instead; perhaps you spent too long in the planning stages. I like the dialogue the most but be careful about the text touching the sides of the balloons, it looks untidy. Had to give you a lower score then I'd have liked.

Sasa: This is the first time I've seen a comic by you (I think!) and I'm pretty impressed! How you draw facial expressions are very well done and…well ‘expressive’ (lol), they're probably my favourite part of the comic. Really like what you're doing with portraying light but I'd recommend researching how light reflects from different materials as the characters look they're all the same smooth-like texture, never the less – well done!

(and I had to post this here because the forum voting place thing was like "LOLNOWE'RENOTHAVINGTHAT")

Damnit my entire comment did post properly >:I

Thresher: Bit disappointed here bro, you had 4 weeks to work on this - and that's plenty of time for a 5 page comic to look a lot tidier and less rushed then this! Honestly it looks like you drew this in a couple of days instead

My side is up on the forum site, but not on the main site.

Hm? There's a comic, but, a default?

Wow both of you guys did great!! Wish you had more time but i liked what both comics brought to the table

Thresher: The bad firstly is the quality. I wish you could of had more background because the characters as well as the story in general were hindered by the lack of art. But at least you got the overall basis of what we needed: clean panels  and simple shapes. I wasn't lost or confused so what you drew got me through the story, the dialogue to me fit the panels and scenes you were able to draw. Besides a few misspellings the story was very solid.

i like the idea of Edge not really engaging Sasa, but showing regret and for lack of better word, fear to facing his past and uncertainty of what to expect. I can't explain why but this sense of cowardice he shows by simply walking away was very powerful to me. The fear didn't seem like he was afraid to face her anger over leaving to another world, but afraid of who he is now, and what she has become. That may just be me, but i enjoyed it overall and hope you continue with these two again.

Sasa: WOW!! I don't have really anything bad to say. at first I was iffy with your color choice. At least the color format if that makes sense. But as I looked back, I could FEEL the atmosphere of a bleak hopeless situation pulling me in. While visually watching the scene play out with your grey dark colors the dialogue pulled me in more. Starting with a gloomy monologue, and then a sudden dark turn at the end! I honestly gasped in my head on the last page!!!

I don't need to say much of the story than awesome. I liked how Edge comes in, yet that feeling of getting worse didn't shake me. I actually felt worried for Edge, especially while those two assholes acted so confident they'd had it all under control. Then BAM, a complete 180 turn reminds me who was in control the whole time. Again wow, and you know the cliffhanger ending IMO works better.

Again you guys did great, and i can't wait to see more

You guys don't have an extension, one of the comics broke for some reason as I was putting it up so I'm having toast take a look at what happened haha sorry for the delays.

-and my posting a comment seems to have brought another bug to the surface, broken punctuation.

There will be a delay in this going up as Toast needs to look at a bug

And my promise of awesome is undone by poor time management on my half, Sorry Sasa, I will make it up to you.

THERE WILL BE AWESOME

Good luck to both....

Awwwyeahh! Looking forward to this B)

startin on this shit when i get home from work AWW BENE