[jba1987]

...from the Animal Girl Criminal Squad!



This is my first real submission to enterVOID, after first finding this site waaaaay back (almost 10 years ago?)! I've been making comics for a bunch of years now, and even though this will sort of get in the way of my current (and very busy) schedule, I really want to participate!

Bunny-Girl and Duck-Girl (the New Recruits) will be the focal characters, just having joined the AGCS and needing to prove their skills!

What do you think of these bodacious babes? (PS do I need to have more-complete renders of the other five girls?)

[Red]

WHOA! I love this!

And yes, even if they are kind of secondary to the main girls, please make a more detailed reference for everyone. You can totally submit a group as a single "character" but they all need to be clearly drawn for your opponent. I would recommend just drawing them in a static standing pose side by side. Take the text off and leave that for the bio section. You can get all fancy in the intro comic, but leave the bio sheet just strictly business.

But yeah, this is precious please draw more!! :0

[jba1987]

Awesome! Okay, will do! B)
And thank you!

[Angie]

This is great! Can't wait to see more!

[Mister Kent]

So cute! So very VOID! I look forward to seeing these girls in action!

[jba1987]

Thanks for all the nice words, folks! I'm finishing up the filled-out design sheet (for all seven ;m;) and the intro comic today!

[BrutalBrutal]

This is cool! Hopefully I can catch up and fast enough to challenge your squad. I could have some fun with that.

[jba1987]

I would love that! I don't think I'll have the intro comic done tonight, going a little overboard with the design sheet But that'll be up soon!

[Ahmed]

"Pants: None"

Haha, lookin great so far.

[jba1987]

Okay! I think this should be a reasonable design sheet? Now all I'll need is the intro comic, right?

[Angie]

Yeah, I think that's good to go! So go ahead on the pages.

[Rose]

This looks like so much fun! I can't wait to see your comics! You totally rock for how quickly you're jumping on this and trying to get all of the requirements done correctly. You're right on track! I can't wait to see more!

[jba1987]

This looks like so much fun! I can't wait to see your comics! You totally rock for how quickly you're jumping on this and trying to get all of the requirements done correctly. You're right on track! I can't wait to see more!

B) Thanks! I was a long-time lurker/reader/interested party back in the day, and when the site crossed my mind (and now that I'm already spending the majority of my time making comics) I knew my best course of action was to dive in head first!

The intro comic is taking longer than I planned (it's longer than I'd planned >__>) but should be ready soon!

[jba1987]

Hey all; just wanted to say I'm not dead/ I haven't lost interest or anything like that; the comic's just a little long and I'm trying to squish it down, and also Smash Bros for Wii U happened. :X

[Angie]

We've been doing a lot of Voider Smash Wii U rooms! You should post your tag in http://entervoid.com/index.php?topic=12788.0

[jba1987]

So! After an injury, 2 fantastic video game releases, Holiday-hijinks, and computer troubles, the intro comic for AGCS is finally done!

v    Look at it here!    v
http://sta.sh/21etnaapscxd
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If it seems a little fast-paced and cut-off, that'd be because my original idea/sketch-pages were running this baby up into about 10/11 pages and I didn't want to be stuck working on the intro for too long!

Is this a suitable intro comic? And if so, what do I do next?

[Energy]

It seems good enough, I would think, but you might want to put in your best effort in these pages.  Also, it's five pages, and if I remember correctly, the highest possible page for an intro is four pages, but you can't go any lower than two.

[jba1987]

I'm pretty comfortable with the amount of effort I put into them! At a certain point I like to assess when the time spent on a page is starting to tip the balance of "Input v Output"; is taking an extra two hours per page that doesn't actually do anything to aide in the integrity of the piece worth it etc.

Anyhow here's the comic with bonus new (and not at all suspicious) formatting?

http://sta.sh/227okhswd1of

[Animeshen]

ahh, I think its adorable haha! action girls in cute animal hats!

[jba1987]

Weee~ Thank you!

[Rose]

Congrats on your approval! Locking thread to make way for newcomers.