Intro Story / Kindervampen

Intro Story — Kindervampen

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Kozispoon
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1211 comments
# 8   Posted: Dec 22 2018, 01:54 PM
Intros on intros!
You're really getting into this crayola kiddie aesthetic. Its totally reminding me of muppet babies but set in a Tim Burton candy coating. You have good motifs and clearly have a look you wanna achieve.

Based off the character bio, I assumed the focus of this group submission were the students, but I feel this intro I got to know the teacher instead. The introductions of the kids is literally one panel each. I'm not sure if this a 'wait and see' tactic, but I certainly hope your first battle gives us more flavor.


















Julz
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411 comments
# 7   Posted: Dec 20 2018, 11:32 AM
This is very cute! I am excited to see how this plays out!

Corn Of The Breads
Artist
154 comments
# 6   Posted: Dec 18 2018, 10:29 AM
I really like all the characters I am hoping to see more of them and hope you can make each one varied and fun!

ArtsandGoodies
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566 comments
# 5   Posted: Dec 17 2018, 07:49 PM
congratz on getting them in. I love the background on the top of page 2, it's so full of personality and a background fitting of your style. It's abstract and unrealistic but in a good way that matches your style and I want to see more of the backgrounds like this.

KarmaLarma
Artist
61 comments
# 4   Posted: Dec 14 2018, 01:50 PM
Super cute! I like how the textured panels look, especially since they give a crayon-y feel when paired with a class of kindergartners. Also I see that little Fawn doll. Cameo... Or /conspiracy/?

Anyway can't wait to see more of these bat brats and what you plan to do with them.

Sean
Artist
384 comments
# 3   Posted: Dec 14 2018, 09:51 AM
Comparing this intro comic to your Fawn intro comic it is clear how much you have improved in the short time you have been part of void. I love seeing this progress and can't wait to see what you can cook up with these rascals! Keep at it!

Orion
Artist
224 comments
# 2   Posted: Dec 14 2018, 01:26 AM
More Cute and More Creepy! (JK they're not creepy they're dangerous ⵉ:< )

Cute designs, lovely concept and loads of room for more fun to be hand. Can't wait to see more!

Radji
Artist
624 comments
# 1   Posted: Dec 13 2018, 09:39 PM
ooooh that's an idea ! A classroom? I mean groups have been tried before but never a classroom !
and full of monster kids too. my my.

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