Intro Story / Kindervampen
Critiques & Comments
# 7
Posted:
Dec 20 2018, 11:32 AM
This is very cute! I am excited to see how this plays out!
# 6
Posted:
Dec 18 2018, 10:29 AM
I really like all the characters I am hoping to see more of them and hope you can make each one varied and fun!
# 5
Posted:
Dec 17 2018, 07:49 PM
congratz on getting them in. I love the background on the top of page 2, it's so full of personality and a background fitting of your style. It's abstract and unrealistic but in a good way that matches your style and I want to see more of the backgrounds like this.
# 4
Posted:
Dec 14 2018, 01:50 PM
Super cute! I like how the textured panels look, especially since they give a crayon-y feel when paired with a class of kindergartners. Also I see that little Fawn doll. Cameo... Or /conspiracy/?
Anyway can't wait to see more of these bat brats and what you plan to do with them.
Anyway can't wait to see more of these bat brats and what you plan to do with them.
# 3
Posted:
Dec 14 2018, 09:51 AM
Comparing this intro comic to your Fawn intro comic it is clear how much you have improved in the short time you have been part of void. I love seeing this progress and can't wait to see what you can cook up with these rascals! Keep at it!
# 2
Posted:
Dec 14 2018, 01:26 AM
More Cute and More Creepy! (JK they're not creepy they're dangerous ⵉ:< )
Cute designs, lovely concept and loads of room for more fun to be hand. Can't wait to see more!
Cute designs, lovely concept and loads of room for more fun to be hand. Can't wait to see more!
# 1
Posted:
Dec 13 2018, 09:39 PM
ooooh that's an idea ! A classroom? I mean groups have been tried before but never a classroom !
and full of monster kids too. my my.
and full of monster kids too. my my.
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You're really getting into this crayola kiddie aesthetic. Its totally reminding me of muppet babies but set in a Tim Burton candy coating. You have good motifs and clearly have a look you wanna achieve.
Based off the character bio, I assumed the focus of this group submission were the students, but I feel this intro I got to know the teacher instead. The introductions of the kids is literally one panel each. I'm not sure if this a 'wait and see' tactic, but I certainly hope your first battle gives us more flavor.