The use of the sticky hand in both of these comics was so charming.  Tucker uses it to stop Koosh's bike from speeding outta control in his round, the timing of having it smack on his head in Koosh's round--I liked it a lot.

what madness is this!

Mrmonkeyloop458: great to see you back. Really at your current level what's gonna help you most is to just keep on drawing and battling as much as you can, soak in knowledge and apply it, see what your opponents are doing with your character and use those different perspectives to your advantage.

Nothin: I really wanted to see how Koosh-Koosh gets All the Things out, TBH it feels like a missing scene

keep goin you guys

@Mrmonkeyloop458: Aww Tucker you clumsy sweetiepie! It's great to see another of your comics, this looks like a big improvement over your first one, so kudos! As for critique: first, nice inking! But you still gotta learn to use different line widths to flesh out your drawings! This might help with your style http://www.rdwarf.com/users/ruggels/inks/inks01.html . Also, don't forget this: when composing a panel, make sure the principal elements are clearly visible! (Talking about first and second panel of page 3) Anyway, great job and hope to see another one of Tucker's (mis)adventures soon!

@Nothin: This comic was so short and sweet! I really love how you interpreted Tucker, he looks so cool in your style! Also Koosh-Koosh, that was so nice of you! (if pretty illegal I might say). Awesome job!

ALL I LEARNED IS THAT THOSE TWO WERE FATED TO MEET.
one has NO IDEA how to be a good exemple for kid, and the other is socially akward. PERFECT

Ah uh sorry for commenting so late today, it's just that I was waiting for more people to comment first.. xD

I really had a lot of fun doing this!

@Nothin : OH my, I really like your drawing style, it's so NICE!!
And YES, it's always good to have more mini sticky hands!

Also I kind of tried my best to get Koosh-Koosh personality on point on my comic pages.. xD

@elge :Oh OK, I made the same mistake last time, the grammar! xD
Oh yes the first page was maybe the only page I rushed on....
But thank you very much for your advice, it is VERY helpful!
I'll try to keep those in mind when doing something like this next time.
And thanks for the late welcome!

Mrmonkeyloop: Good job on uploading your first comic here on VOID, it's good to see where your skill level is at the moment and how much we can improve. I'm going to give out some small nitpicks, first of all, don't trust your handwriting... Or if you do, make it as clear as possible and check your grammar. You can download comic fonts at blambot dot com. It'll make it easier on the eyes of your readers and will make your comics look cleaner.
Second. SHOW dont TELL: Page 2, last pannel; Tucker is -going down- already. No need for him to think about it.
Third. If you think you can't finish coloring all your pages, it is perhaps best to leave them all in Black and White. The first page looks weird to be shown colored, while what follows has just inks.
Once again, Welcome to VOID, we'll be looking forward to see how much you grow in comic-making. Good luck!

Nothin: What an adorable comic! I love how you drew Tucker all happy in the last page. I have always liked your way of inking stuff, but just like I told your opponent, it is best to leave all pages in inks instead of having one colored. It gives the illusion of an unfinished comic.

omg i love how ridiculous these are!!!! ridiculous in a good way of course. had me rolling! im sorry yall couldnt finish, though.

I can't wait to see more of Tucker, and I love what I've seen of Koosh!
Good luck to both of you!

Make this a good one!

Let the battle BEGIN!! xD

I'll try to give my all when doing the comics.

well anyways good luck!