[Lukia]

Hey guys, heres a new character i created a while back let me know what you guys think...

   






Name: Bilikis

Age: 27

Height: 5’9

Gender: Female

History: Born and raised in the Harlequinade, at an early age Bilikis was pitted against other Harlequins of her age, in a primitive all out battle royal to decide who was the strongest fighters. She and nine other combatants were left standing. These were to be the future leaders of the Harlequinade.
  Bililkis was educated in several forms of unarmed combat, terrorism, intimidation, stealth and leadership. Although she loathed the teachings, she enjoyed the fighting and handing down the skills and techniques she had learned to the next generation, this blossomed a sense of authority within her, it was then she knew one day it will her time to lead and protect the Harlequinade.   

Personality: like most Harlequins during battle, Bilikis is attracted to strong opponents, she will stalk them to the ends of the earth to test her strength against them.
  She is a sadistic sociopath, with a sharp tongue armed with sarcastic comments, she tends to enrage her opponents in order for them to inflict more damage upon her, the more pain she receives, the more pleasure and worthy the fight is for her. Even while losing the fight, her confidence never dwindles (unless she truly believes she cannot win), although the longer she fights the more overconfident she becomes, and her martial arts prowess is reduced to that of simple street fighting, This causes her to become extremely dangerous and unpredictable.
  Outside the fight she is a humble wanderer with an unhealthy attachment to alcohol, she likes to immerse herself amongst small groups and crowds who are up to their neck in drama, though she is unaware, this is where her untapped ability ‘The Domino effect’ comes into play.     

Likes: strong opponents, learning from opponents, alcohol, teaching, a challenge, drama, watching drama unfold

Hates: Marveaux (rival), those who fight from a distance (although she likes the challenge), authority figures, those who break up/interrupt fights

Abilities: Superhuman Strength, Speed and Agility, (unaware) The Domino effect,

Affiliation:  Ex member of the Harlequinade (presumed missing/dead)

Gear:

Harlequin Mask: The harlequin mask is near indestructible once put on, and can only be destroyed by another Harlequin. Although Bilikis is no longer part of the Harlquinade, she still upholds the Harlequin tradition and is forbidden to remove the mask.



Sorry for the wait...






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[PyrasTerran]

PAGES



The hierarchy is as such:


1) Hiemie the Fishboy

2) Drawing Comics

3) Creating Characters


So let's see some pages or at the very least an idea of WHO this person is~

[Lukia]

Pages are comin soon i promise

[Pennydox]

Random thing, but does her height include her hair?

[Lukia]

Umm thats a good question, I suppose with her hair she would just be under 6 foot

[Mister Kent]

I love the hair and the design in general is very cool! I think her bottom half is a bit too short, though. I am very excited to see pages for this--the style of your sheet is so nicely polished

[Lukia]

Yeah I hear you about her bottom half, I need to keep an eye on her anatomy. Thanks Kent

[Red]

Very cool so far! I love her hair so much haha. The only thing I wanted to mention, which I see was already brought up, is that she looks super super short and you said she was 5' 9" ... which is pretty tall for a lady. It looks like her legs should be much longer! Other than that, this looks good! I'll patiently wait for pages

[Fred]

I actually don't think the legs are wrong. If you look at the outstretched leg, it's a proper size relative to the top half. It looks a bit odd because the other leg goes straight down, indicating it's also meant to be going backwards, it just doesn't really read at first look right now it's more like her legs are different lengths, and the the luscious hair is taking way space up top, faking the balance. Mostly it's the hair I think. I think it's cool.

[Monday]

Arm length is a little on the long side. Unless that's her superpower.

[Lukia]

Lol thanks for the crits guys, yeah 5'9 is quite tall for a female, I'll have to watch her height next to other characters. Lol don't Monday she has no long arm powers, but I admit after the sketch I looked at her arms and thought 'ah crap' then I was in the mirror looking at my reflection thinking 'my arms are long' so kinder just went with it. I'm glad you guys like the hair.

[Lukia]

I meant don't worry Monday'

[Lukia]

2 pages up.

[Mister Kent]

NEW PAGES! Yay I like them. Is that Marveaux? Ooh he's mean.

I like your style, and can't wait for you to submit and get into the field.

[PyrasTerran]

yeah! yeah!

Keep 'em coming, you've got some things here that can be discussed in critique once the pages are up, but you're pretty ready to submit once you get those last 1-2 pages up.

[Lukia]

Thanks Kent, and yep that's Marveaux, Bilikis's rival. Thanks Pyras, I'm working on the third and fourth as I type.

[Animeshen]

I'm a little unsure of the "now", "then" parts in the first couple panels, if you wanna show a time change you could probably take out "now" and replace "then" with, like, "6 months ago" or something- any then maybe use a colour shift to show a different mood. maybe just that first panel is a different colour, or maybe its the same monochrome as that second panel, just something to suggest the time shift in the art more. but I like your panel use and action, and glad you are following through with pages! keep 'em coming!

[Lukia]

I hear you Animeshen, thanks for the crit & suggestion. I'll give it a try an see how they look and post it up when i finish the next two pages.