Bobo: Ah, the tragic "Could have been a team, but alas..." And it was pretty suspenseful, too, even though it wasn't a mystery who would survive. Sometimes the thin lines and flat colors work beautifully, but in other panels it's a little flat and hard to see.
Cats: And here's the tragic side of her power, complete with an accidental capture! Although... it took a bit of rereading to realize she wasn't currently on doing some weird magic stuff with the internet. I'm undecided on how I feel about the halftones, bit works well enough. Sometimes the text isn't really fitting in the bubbles quite right. The last panel is a good way to end it, bu the different rendering might be working against it.
Speed Death Tournament 2018, Round 2 / Sludge vs. Alma the Witch
Critiques & Comments
# 9
Posted:
Feb 11 2018, 11:17 AM
# 8
Posted:
Feb 10 2018, 12:20 PM
Bobo: Sludge is a super neat character, and I like the quest Sludge is on to track down the crystals! Also I love that her parents are super adorable and super stupid and super rich. And those backgrounds are killer! Lots of detail.
Cats: I like the glimpse into the stress Alma's powers are putting on her, and her brother was cute, caring for his friend :> The pop of color really helped enhance Alma's powers, too. One thing I noticed is that some of your word bubbles were a little pixelly? And maybe some of the others could be a smidge bigger to give the words some room.
Cats: I like the glimpse into the stress Alma's powers are putting on her, and her brother was cute, caring for his friend :> The pop of color really helped enhance Alma's powers, too. One thing I noticed is that some of your word bubbles were a little pixelly? And maybe some of the others could be a smidge bigger to give the words some room.
# 7
Posted:
Feb 6 2018, 11:25 AM
these were very close for me! I enjoyed both though.
I like the story that sludge is going through! I'm still a little confused on sludge's powers but she does cool shit so I guess I'll let it slide. I think you have a much nicer looking comic this round too, digital helped you out. maybe more contrast in your grey tones next time!
I liked the setup in alma's comic, and seeing alma wrestle with her spirits. a flat point for me was the actual act of sludge touching the thing and dying. but sludge being lost and confused after the fact was tragic.
I like the story that sludge is going through! I'm still a little confused on sludge's powers but she does cool shit so I guess I'll let it slide. I think you have a much nicer looking comic this round too, digital helped you out. maybe more contrast in your grey tones next time!
I liked the setup in alma's comic, and seeing alma wrestle with her spirits. a flat point for me was the actual act of sludge touching the thing and dying. but sludge being lost and confused after the fact was tragic.
# 6
Posted:
Feb 5 2018, 09:41 AM
Two wonderfully amazing comics, by two wonderfully amazing people!! Good luck to you both, I had tons of fun seeing your guys's kiddos! These comics are both so sad. TmT
Specific notes:
Bobo, I loved the backgrounds you did have throughout this comic, they were absolutely breathtaking!
Saavy: Oh my gosh, the way you draw Bobo's character is so freaking adorable. And man, that was a sad end. OmO
Specific notes:
Bobo, I loved the backgrounds you did have throughout this comic, they were absolutely breathtaking!
Saavy: Oh my gosh, the way you draw Bobo's character is so freaking adorable. And man, that was a sad end. OmO
# 5
Posted:
Feb 4 2018, 11:02 PM
SUBMITTED! *passes out*
# 4
Posted:
Jan 29 2018, 11:49 AM
Oh nooooo cuties killing cuties! ;__;
# 3
Posted:
Jan 29 2018, 11:15 AM
OH yay!! Sludge is so cutee ~ Can't wait to draw her /and add her to Alma's collection of souls/
# 2
Posted:
Jan 29 2018, 09:57 AM
*GASP* I LOVE ALMA TOO BAD I'MA HAFTA KILL HER ;A;
# 1
Posted:
Jan 29 2018, 09:53 AM
WOW TWO OF MY VERY FAVORITE TOURNEY CHARACTERS GOING HEAD TO HEAD? THIS'LL BE FREAKING EPIC! (Good luck you wonderful friendos!!!)
Speed Death Tournament Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Feb 11th, 2018
Votes Cast:
30
Page Views:
1429
Winner:
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