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Can I just say I live for doomsday salesman Niles

A doodle is a doodle and this thread is old but HEY NILES IS HERE

Despite everyone's suffering he's actually...Pretty jovial? Certainly flourishing compared to the others, beit in positive spirit or in supplies. If asked why, he'd just say "It's because I don't belong in this heap of shit." Others efforts may be to save whoever they can, survive, etc. etc., he's more focused on benefiting himself through 'reasonable' trade. No one really knows where he gets all his stuff, but hey, he has it and it's for sale so what's the problem? 

Ash, meanwhile, packed up her fuckin' bags and left the universe the moment the first warning signs popped up. So we can just assume she's fine and happy and at home with her family right now.

THE INCUBATOR / Re: SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« on: Sep 13, 2018, 09:54 PM »
Nice sketches dude! I hope you don't mind me just throwing some stuff out from what I've seen in these wips? Mainly, some zoomed out shots would be nice? Because aside from theee fifth panel of page one, there's really no fullbody shots of the characters demonstrated here nor will the reader get a good view of the environment they're in.

And also, when I first looked at these wips the first thing I noticed was the amount of speechbubbles that are crossing several panels when they don't have to. Especially in the last two panels of page 1, it's hard to stay focused on the supposedly intense  visuals (Even /if/ they're sketches) when the lengthy speech bubbles cut right into it. The 2 speechbubbles in page 2 (Panel 2 and Panel 3) that cut into other panels as well, it confused me as to how I'm supposed to be reading the page, which panel is the next one. And this could be solved by zooming out and/or rearranging the panels composition.

But looks good overall! Cute characters~

News & Events / Re: /[|| RETRIBUTION: Order vs Chaos ||]\
« on: Sep 05, 2018, 09:27 AM »
Feels good to see lawful catching up, but that being said while I'm sorta just in the midst of reworking Niles here and there-- He'll be a lawless little man. A criminal dudebro.

Art Jams / Re: Pin up jam [18+] NSFW
« on: Aug 19, 2018, 08:14 PM »
putting this here because i can LOL
i love using the airbrush tool

VOID University / Re: Mentor and Trainee Roulette [REVIVAL]
« on: Aug 17, 2018, 11:30 PM »
Energy and I will be doing an Ash vs. Kazue battle, with a maximum of 6 pages!

VOID University / Re: Mentor and Trainee Roulette [REVIVAL]
« on: Aug 17, 2018, 12:25 AM »
Eeeeee, already said this in the discord, but I'm looking forward to working with you! :^ D

News & Events / Re: Void's Sexiest 2018 Pageant Royale!
« on: Aug 15, 2018, 02:47 PM »
5 week span makes it very tempting for me as well, haha
im not definite on participating just yet BUT im very interested in seeing who the competition will be~

update: definitely wont be joining for the sake of my health, BUT IM STILL HYPE TO SEE ALL THE PARTICIPANTS

VOID University / Re: Mentor and Trainee Roulette [REVIVAL]
« on: Aug 09, 2018, 08:20 AM »
Applying as a trainee! Since this tournament starts on the 20th, in the situation that I do get picked up as a trainee, I disclaim that I'll be starting my fall semester (I will be free on Monday, Wednesday, and Saturday/Sunday, but we can talk in detail about this if necessary once the ball gets rolling) so developing my time-management skills is something to be considered.

I have a specific schedule I work with during 1-week battles, but no doubt this will be prone to change this time around so we can talk about that. I'm completely free before and after school, so we can talk via discord (DM's, screenshare, and/or voicechat is a-ok with me), e-mail works as well but I tend to be slow on replies with that method). Never been on Google hangouts before, but there's a first time for everything as they say. 

Other then that, as much as I do wanna say that I need help with basically everything, I need the most help with once again time-management (I find I get behind schedule once it's time to color), color scheme/choices, and a little bit of scene composition. Honestly, a first choice for a mentor? Anyone works! I ain't a picky fellow, but if choosing is a must it's a split between Shen and Heathen.

(Wanted to add in, I also wanted to try doing a horizontal-oriented comic, but if I can't then I can't but I do wanna give it a try in this rumble!)

Art Jams / Re: White Party jam
« on: Jul 23, 2018, 07:23 PM »
shes here for the drinks, if anything

THE INCUBATOR / Re: Graeskar and Oswood Duo Incubator
« on: Jul 22, 2018, 12:07 PM »
Welcome to Void, Ghosti!
These characters and their descriptions already seem good enough for submission, I'd honestly say there's nothing to really add, nor change that you can't expand upon in future comics. Definitely make that intro comic yo, looking forward to you joining and battling others!

News & Events / Re: /[|| RETRIBUTION: Order vs Chaos ||]\
« on: Jul 13, 2018, 08:33 PM »
I'll be joining in with Ashlan as a lawful character! : 3

VOID Characters and Comics / Re: Challenges Thread
« on: Jul 12, 2018, 11:26 PM »
Ok now that Ash is in I'm diving headfirst and saying that I'm look for a one week battle with Ash! 3-4 pages maximum, please hit me up in the DM's or Discord if interested! :>
Just trying to get a better grasp on my speed with these comics and stuff haha.

Nvm babes! Just got a dm, Ash is taken for the week!

THE INCUBATOR / Re: Denim Robot Model 330 (INCUBATOR)
« on: Jul 12, 2018, 10:43 PM »
LOVE HIM ALREADY.....spunky robots are JUST my type!!

Would love to see you submit him to void!!!

spit spat, time to chat / Re: DOIV CITY Tournament
« on: Jul 06, 2018, 11:46 PM »
I'd LOVE to apply with Niles!

« on: Jun 06, 2018, 08:56 PM »
Hello, and welcome to Void! :D
I love the design of your character, and I'm certainly interested in what you'll bring to the table with this characters story! I'd love to battle you if you ever do decide to join and submit a comic ;3c

Art Jams / Re: LGBT+ Jam
« on: Jun 03, 2018, 05:55 PM »
Eyyyy it's Pride month so B) take m' sweet sweet babes, Ash (Transwoman & a lesbian), and Niles (Trans & pan)

VOID Characters and Comics / Re: Challenges Thread
« on: May 30, 2018, 01:18 AM »
Siiince school is ending in a week or so, I figured that now could be the best time to do another comic battle with Niles!
I'm up for a 3 week-er, or 2 weeks with 3 to 4 pages maximum. I might just set up an open challenge as well for posterity's sake, but either way, if anyone's interested please hmu on here or discord! :> I'm Monstro on the Void discord server.

Art Jams / Re: The Love-Child Jam
« on: May 25, 2018, 08:46 PM »
Here are the babies I did!! ;3c

Spoiler: show




AAAND the extra doodles that came with them

Spoiler: show

Art Jams / Re: Tea Party Panic (Secret Santa Style Event)
« on: May 12, 2018, 12:25 PM »
Feel free to add me to the waitstaff, then! : Dc I'd be happy to help

THE INCUBATOR / Re: Eny's very complex characters save me
« on: May 11, 2018, 09:26 PM »
Good luck with the comic! Even though you've just started, I recommend that you zoom out on some panels so that there's more breathing room and everything looks less cramped/cluttered, and your text bubbles don't interrupt other panels by sticking into them as well if there's more space.

Art Jams / Re: Rpg Roulette! (Secret Santa Style Event)
« on: Apr 30, 2018, 07:39 PM »

Warlock-esque Veronica!

Art Jams / Re: Hogwarts Jam
« on: Apr 26, 2018, 01:24 AM »
I don't know the slightest thing about Hogwarts but I'm still joining in on the fun :'3c He's muggle-born, and very quiet. Has very few friends in the academy, but that's fine with him! His familiar is a worm, no one really knows how it's still alive tbh.

Art Jams / Re: Welcome to Diov City
« on: Apr 16, 2018, 07:36 PM »

Giving up on returning to his previous life and family, Niles takes up a new goal to make up for his desolation: To make others happy!
He's never completely satisfied, but that's not a problem if others certainly are!
His monster half is still there, but controlled, suppressed, and rarely seen.

Art Jams / Re: Rpg Roulette! (Secret Santa Style Event
« on: Apr 15, 2018, 09:54 AM »
I'll be signing up with Niles/Saab! : Dc

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