I like what you've got here for a character so far. I wouldn't mind seeing more superhero types around VOID and I think you've got a lot of potential to improve here. It's great that you've come out with a strong presentation so far, a design sheet, simple bio and some pages for us to look at. With your pages I see that you're trying many things, perspective, backgrounds, people and that is great that you are diving into it headfirst. However it's also obvious that you need to work at all of these things. Keep in mind the proportions of your people and the anatomy you'll need to practice to keep them in form. Practice heads as you have some trouble keeping the shape consistent. When he carries the girl, her head flattens out a bit too much. It's great that you're keeping backgrounds in mind but look to examples of your favorite works, you want the backgrounds to be less sparse and more full, more lived in which means they need more detail. If it's a lab you'll want to see more wires and machinery or maybe you need more texture. Basically continue to push yourself and you'll do great. I hope to see you finish up these pages the best you can and remember don't be afraid to erase and work on the underlying structure of an object if you need to.
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Colbitzer
@ 3:32 PM Apr 17th