How fun! I thought both had really great expressions and designs! And in my (very humble) opinion, I thought maybe Coatle had better line weight, while Betito had more fluid poses. But I enjoyed both! I wish I could have seen Coatl's completed comic!

I'll berieve it when I see it!

You've got alot of comics you said you may resubmit as completed in the future dude maybe you should invest in angie's fine bootcamp.

THAT BEING SAID,

Your figures are coming along nicely. You need to give more love to your backgrounds, of course.


Betito, you should ask any of us to proofread your script before you post it up, because it distracts from the story. The monster designs are neat, and the story is cute. Like Coatl you need to work on backgrounds, because even if you fill it with color the world feels empty.  

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I have to note that you guys got simply a 3rd of the entire comic. wish i wasnt rushing with the inks but experience.

I may resubmit it in full or in the best parts on the forum in the near future.

I have to note that you guys got simply a 3rd of the entire comic. wish i wasnt rushing with the inks but experience.

I may resubmit it in full or in the best parts on the forum in the near future.

I CANT BERIEVE IT!

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ROCK THIS SHIT MOFOS!!

OH SHIT!!! I can't wait to see what you guys have planned for this battle. good luck