Show Posts - faffabout

Show Posts

This section allows you to view all posts made by this member. Note that you can only see posts made in areas you currently have access to.


Messages - faffabout

Pages: [1]
1
THE INCUBATOR / Re: faffabout's lout
« on: Apr 04, 2013, 06:32 AM »
Just taken on the challenge of cutting out the scribbly sketchiness. Thanks for the advice. Thought I'd put the stages up so you guys get a better view of how I did it, forgot to take a picture of just the scribbly sketch that i did originally but oh well...







-faffabout

2
THE INCUBATOR / Re: faffabout's lout
« on: Apr 02, 2013, 07:42 PM »
Ah okay.  Thanks for that. Il take that on board. I believe I've been told off for my scribberling in the past. Its great that you've shown a solution to this problem.


Faffabout

3
THE INCUBATOR / Re: faffabout's lout
« on: Apr 02, 2013, 10:25 AM »
The sketchiness seems less about definition and more about filling space.
Yer cool, i see what you're saying. Do you mean the anatomy lines of the character, or the background, or just the general scribble i do? I think this is my sort of style when i sketch anyway. But on the other hand i think me using byro gives it a very regimented line structure, which could be seen as stale.

I'm going to steal some of Joe's nib pens to see if i can get better line variation.

I really liked the last bit where you said how we place our own views on the homeless. This is the vibe I'm going for. Although we think Lout is having a shit time, his priorities are totally different to ours. As you can see in the first two pages, he gets absolutely buzzing from receiving a sleeping bag.

Thanks for your brain.

faffabout

4
THE INCUBATOR / Re: faffabout's lout
« on: Apr 02, 2013, 06:05 AM »
at this point I have no idea what's going on... well, maybe I have an idea of what's going on, I just don't understand why?
That's kind of the whole point, my character hasn't got a clue what's going on either.
The green is more of a stylistic choice. This is representative of his lifestyle. As green can often portray sickness.
It was intended for him to piss himself, but he didn't have a clue what was going on, so it is just as likely that faffabout lout did have an orgasmic reaction.

Do you think the vagueness works? I'm trying to show life from lout's perspective, so life is a bit of a blur. I'm trying to let you as the reader take what you want from the pictures and little dialogue I have.
Thanks for the comment.

faffabout

5
THE INCUBATOR / Re: faffabout's lout
« on: Apr 02, 2013, 05:55 AM »
Hi. Thanks muchly for the feedback.
crozlands drawings are nice.

The passerby with the brogues was holding an unused sleeping bag. It just so happens that faffabout lout was lying there on the street to recieve it.
Faffabout lout is about 2 steps behind the rest of the world. So when this guy approaches him holding the orange bundle, he hasn't really got a clue who he is, what he is doing there or what the bundle is for.
The final drawing is just showing him being content with chilling in his new sleeping bag. I'm going for the before and after effect.

Thanks again for the constructive criticism

faffabout


6
THE INCUBATOR / Re: faffabout's lout
« on: Apr 02, 2013, 04:02 AM »



faffabout

7
THE INCUBATOR / Re: faffabout's lout
« on: Apr 02, 2013, 03:02 AM »
Easy now!!

Thank you, much appreciated. Please feel free to criticise. I'm completely new to comic format and composition. If I'm being a noob- tell me.

I finished the next two pages lastnight. Il put it up soon.i just woke up.

Thanks again

Faffabout

8
THE INCUBATOR / faffabout's lout
« on: Apr 01, 2013, 07:42 PM »
Yo.

This is my first post.
Just made my character on void tonight.
JoeNeary is my cousin and I am staying round his tonight. This is what i've done.

This is a trial character im putting out there for people to see.

UPDATE: Done a Design Sheet!



Here is my comic...






Easy Now - faffabout!



Pages: [1]

Latest Topics -

 
All News, All The Time 
Last updated: Staff Bot - Mar 28, 2024, 07:15 PM
Clown Jam 
Last updated: Radji - Feb 11, 2024, 04:51 AM
INTRODUCE YOURSELF 
Last updated: Maz - Nov 06, 2023, 04:13 PM
FAQ: Questions About Void? Post Yours Here! 
Last updated: Darius Corry - Sep 09, 2023, 03:15 PM
Art Diary of an Eternal Student 
Last updated: BoogidiBzdo - Aug 22, 2023, 09:17 PM
 

Latest Members -


Users online -

 
441 Guests, 1 User


[]

Most Online Today: 504.
Most Online Ever: 1,184 (Jan 13, 2020, 06:21 PM)

 

About Us

We exist to provide an environment for artists to learn and improve their sequential art skills competitively. Our community is designed to give critical feedback and encouragement to our many members the world over, at all skill levels.

Follow Us