The sketchiness seems less about definition and more about filling space.
Yer cool, i see what you're saying. Do you mean the anatomy lines of the character, or the background, or just the general scribble i do? I think this is my sort of style when i sketch anyway. But on the other hand i think me using byro gives it a very regimented line structure, which could be seen as stale.
I'm going to steal some of Joe's nib pens to see if i can get better line variation.
I really liked the last bit where you said how we place our own views on the homeless. This is the vibe I'm going for. Although we think Lout is having a shit time, his priorities are totally different to ours. As you can see in the first two pages, he gets absolutely buzzing from receiving a sleeping bag.
Thanks for your brain.
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