VOID
Art => Art Jams => Topic started by: Angie on Nov 29, 2009, 11:53 PM
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Since this one got a lot of positive responses in the art jam suggestion thread..
"Have you ever had a moment where you had to cut down on one or multiple scenes in a battle? Was there a different way you wanted to portray a scene but you were too close to the deadline? The purpose of this potential jam is to illustrate any scenes you intended or wanted to add in your battle, but never had a chance to during the deadline. For a bonus challenge, take one of your old comics and remake the entire thing and then compare it to show how much you progressed over time in VOID."
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Alright, I got lots of actual deleted scenes as in whole panels and pages I didn't use. While this wasn't the entire point of the jam, since no one else has done it enjoy! Some of these have appeared in my author's notes, but here's the up close better scanned versions. You'll see that I often not only do entire pages before scrapping them, but I change shit a lot. I'd like to eventually do this jam proper as there was a few scenes I didn't do for the Robin BB. These are the originals and not things I redid so yeah, crappy scans.
Angela Rudell vs Scarlett Prologue:Random pages and panels, I can't show you most of the final versions I used as that battle is currently broken and not on my DA.
(http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/8642/directorscut1.jpg)
(http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/6521/directorscut3.jpg)
(http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/1932/directorscut4.jpg)
(http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/5590/directorscut2.jpg)
final version of the above here http://angieness.deviantart.com/art/Angela-vs-Scarlett-Prologue-12-75714515
Why they were cut/changed:readability issues or I came up with more interesting angles. Especially where Angie uses her blood abilities to infiltrate the police officer's body and make him explode pretty much. Which could have been cool but the viewer probably wouldn't have gotten it.
Angela Rudell vs Scarlett
(http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/8438/directorscut5.jpg)
final version here http://angieness.deviantart.com/art/Angela-vs-Scarlett-Page-7-80363971
Why it was changed:I really liked those top two panels, especially berserk ass Angie but it didn't fit the format and I realized oh fuck she was running from the other direction and had to flip that scar panel.
Angela Rudell in Moving Foward
(http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/7820/directorscut6.jpg)
final version http://entervoid.com/view.php?id=2056&side=1&iid=9 here
Why it was changed:well for one it was kind of dumb that there was just a random dark room with like 100 people standing in it for no reason. And for another, I wanted Angie to directly interact with the leader of the Masked Men. In this scene she just merely walks up and explains that she's coming back and you don't get that she's talking to the leader.
Angela Rudell vs Fedra
(http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/2118/directorscut7.jpg)
final version http://entervoid.com/view.php?id=2494&side=1&iid=01 here
Why it was changed:Not really a scene, this was the original cover. There was going to be lots of dramatic heavy blacks with like patterns and designs inside the blacks or something, think Serial Experiments Lain. I'd dropped it because I came up with something more fun as I sat in class and doodled the new cover.
And for dealing with the vague and poorly scanned crap, here's a little bonus
(http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/9712/directorscut8.jpg)
from my Beyond Battle I'm working on! The above is the final lines (haven't colored anything yet), below was the original. I zoomed in to put more impact on Angie's expressions, which I enjoyed the fuck out of doing.
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gonna do this when I have the chance. just nag at me if I forget.
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I was cleaning a bit the work space, and i saw this lost page i drew for the Su VS Kojiro battle...huh...this was one of some ideas i had back then, and didn't use.
(https://docs.google.com/uc?id=0B93C7NpivgrAOGFmOTVjMDEtOGE0YS00NjU1LWExOWQtZGJmY2M2NzlhMjYw&hl=en)
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i should post up my last fights cut scenes. cool idea Heather.
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Dunno if these exactly fit... They're from battles that were either canceled, or just never were
Merk Beyond Batttle featuring Dr. Fabulous:
(http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m55/Qyzex/Comic%20pages/Merk_Cahoots_1.jpg)
(http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m55/Qyzex/Comic%20pages/Merk_Cahoots_2.jpg)
(fyi, the contraband was going to be hammerspace)
Velvet vs. Pinn:
(http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m55/Qyzex/Comic%20pages/VvsP-Page1Preview-4.jpg)
Velvet vs. Whoa:
(http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m55/Qyzex/Comic%20pages/Void-VelvetVSWhoa-1.jpg)
(http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m55/Qyzex/Comic%20pages/Void-VelvetVSWhoa-2.jpg)
(http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m55/Qyzex/Comic%20pages/Void-VelvetVSWhoa-3PREVIEW.jpg)
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I'll just throw these pages up. These were the last two pages of the Edgar Grimsette vs Aesimi & Beethoven battle that weren't able to go up because I was stupid about uploading things.
(http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f201/quaidezmaster/aevoid9-1.jpg)
(http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f201/quaidezmaster/aevoid10-1.jpg)
Antique stores are a complete pain in the ass to draw. :c
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I was digging around and found pieces of my battle against Carlito - Jane vs. Chia Hui - that I defaulted on. I was going to finish as a beyond battle, but perhaps the time has passed - anyway, here's the first two pages! Mostly colored ish (this was from like the beginning of the year)
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v410/OhSiris/VOID/LostFight1.jpg)
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v410/OhSiris/VOID/LostFight2.jpg)
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(http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/2358/reunion1.jpg)
(http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/6205/reunion2q.jpg)
(http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/8337/reunion3.jpg)
(http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/452/reunion4.jpg)
(http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/2796/reunion5.jpg)
Few months ago this suppose to be reunion between Steven and Bob. Including a lot of delusion combined with real memories :)
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Nice sketchs man!
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Very neat jam idea. Here are some deleted pages and forgotten BB attempts.
Here is a BB featuring RedBlood Phill bringing in a bounty
(http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/9919/philleeep.jpg)
yes, that door way is like 15 feet high.
(http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/4477/phillbb22.jpg)
This got dropped because I couldn't figure out where I was going with the story.
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im working on my deleted scences from my final. give me like a day.
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like i promised here is my process. from beginning to the original ending.
(http://www.deviantart.com/download/196027975/process_to_final_battle_by_ponbiki-d38pk5j.jpg)
ill be happy to answer any questions you have or what ever. thanks for looking
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...I'd like to see this in more detail...please?
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Sorry this as big as I can make due to my pc low memory right now. hopefully no one get angry with me posting a big version of this. hope you can see it better. it gets cut of more though.
(http://www.deviantart.com/download/196027975/process_to_final_battle_by_ponbiki-d38pk5j.jpg)
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you can see it here alot better if you click on the download button on the right side.. http://ponbiki.deviantart.com/art/process-to-final-battle-196027975
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Yeah this is my initial start to my battle against Suit, but I couldn't write it out without it being too long.
(http://i51.tinypic.com/29mwzr5.jpg)
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This is the battle I sketched up for OCM 'n Jinney back in ... 2008? Suffering in quality since I was only able to get the quick sketches done from way back then. Lost the original files due to computer crash so I just never bothered to touch. Might as well post it somewhere. Just click on the thumbs for bigger image.
(http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/th_aoj01.jpg) (http://s1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/?action=view¤t=aoj01.jpg)
(http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/th_aoj02.jpg) (http://s1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/?action=view¤t=aoj02.jpg)
(http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/th_aoj03.jpg) (http://s1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/?action=view¤t=aoj03.jpg)
(http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/th_aoj04.jpg) (http://s1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/?action=view¤t=aoj04.jpg)
(http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/th_aoj05.jpg) (http://s1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/?action=view¤t=aoj05.jpg)
(http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/th_aoj06.jpg) (http://s1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/?action=view¤t=aoj06.jpg)
(http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/th_aoj07.jpg) (http://s1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/?action=view¤t=aoj07.jpg)
(http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/th_aoj08.jpg) (http://s1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/?action=view¤t=aoj08.jpg)
(http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/th_aoj09.jpg) (http://s1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/?action=view¤t=aoj09.jpg)
(http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/th_aoj10.jpg) (http://s1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/?action=view¤t=aoj10.jpg)
(http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/th_aoj11.jpg) (http://s1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/?action=view¤t=aoj11.jpg)
(http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/th_aoj12.jpg) (http://s1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee430/1thing2know/?action=view¤t=aoj12.jpg)
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(http://i52.tinypic.com/2l8iurd.jpg)
(http://oi52.tinypic.com/2n99eut.jpg)
(http://i55.tinypic.com/1037qf9.jpg)
Last three pages of my battle i had alot of trouble uploading them ...whatevs
anyway i'm glad they aren't there
they are really weak by comparrison.
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Explosive Climaxxx! Nice work 4AM
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Since Bob didn't get scarred by Kars I don't have to draw this BB anymore - it'd be 3 chapters per 3 pages and here are covers for those chapters:
(http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/8434/powerless01.jpg)
Chapter 1 Injury
(http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/4025/powerless02.jpg)
Chapter 2 Inhuman condition
(http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/1929/powerless03.jpg)
Chapter 3 Recovery
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Awesome Jam,..feels like i am reading through a ''Flight'' collection ,..so much diversity and awesomeness !
4 am: ha ha that oral scene made me laugh ! ;D
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Not exactly a deleted scene, but rather pages to a battle that never happened between Corry and ..well I hope it's obvious.
(http://i56.tinypic.com/ayx5s3.jpg)
(http://i53.tinypic.com/fbyqsm.jpg)
(http://i54.tinypic.com/25s1kw2.jpg)
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Oh man! When did Andre become a planeteer?!
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Oh man! When did Andre become a planeteer?!
Haha, Andre's always been a planeteer. No one ever gives him the striped look on his stuff belt and bracelet and I'm gonna get rid of it too.
Those pages are sick Mrnoitaull, too bad that fight never happened!
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My comic's nearing the end of voting time, so I might as well post these.
They're whatever I was able to recover when my computer busted out on me. After page two, a robbery occurs midway through the show and it was left to G.Swan and Arena to save the day. Next time, I'll be smarter with my saving files.
(http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/3723/page3deleted.png)
(http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/6905/page4deleted.png)
(http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/3893/page5deleted.png)
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I am totally going to revive/abuse/spam this thread with all the Wizzie comics that were going to happen THEN DIDN'T. WHAHAUHAWUHAUHAWR.
Anthology Entry:
(http://i.imgur.com/PdEn3UE.jpg)
(http://i.imgur.com/zcQb82C.jpg)
(http://i.imgur.com/89fsbE4.jpg)
Easter comic:
(http://i.imgur.com/5dtNfc4.jpg)
Pip and Wizzie:
(http://i.imgur.com/uBEOV1p.jpg)
(http://i.imgur.com/EYtNi0L.jpg)
Hack:
(http://i.imgur.com/5KPDI9P.jpg)
Wizzie vs Sodeh:
(http://i.imgur.com/C4rKvgx.jpg)
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(http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d113/Beckson/IMG_09022013_013908_zpsd14daba6.png)
Hope Mags doesn't mind me posting this.... silly little practice comic page we did before the TTT. Forgot about it til now! I did the lines and Mags coloured
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I don't think I'll ever finish this so I'll just dump it here.
These are the jumbled pages of a beyond battle that went nowhere.
(http://oi39.tinypic.com/2vu0aqt.jpg)
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*Weeps over how beautiful Slagglle's pages are*
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oh man! those are so great and what are all these invitational doing here all of a sudden and more importantly why didn't you finish it?
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More Slagglle love
do deleted comics count? :(
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v36/PyrasTerran/millervsamelialucas_zpsdbce8a6d.jpg) (http://smg.photobucket.com/user/PyrasTerran/media/millervsamelialucas_zpsdbce8a6d.jpg.html)
by some stroke of insane luck I found one of the surviving pages of my ill-fated battle with slag's Amelia and Lucas. Here, the camera-wielding duo enter a Vektran bar in search of Miller.
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Vs Colossal Princess, director's cut.
One or two days after the deadline, I had some time during a bus ride to give some kind of colors to some pages. Because I hate having an uncolored comic to my record. :(
(http://imageshack.us/a/img22/9787/swjr.jpg)
(http://imageshack.us/a/img4/6807/j9v0.jpg)
(http://imageshack.us/a/img13/315/c6mc.jpg)
(http://imageshack.us/a/img21/2037/663l.jpg)
(http://imageshack.us/a/img441/3460/36ow.jpg)
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A sample of what could've been in Ivan Reinhardt vs Gossamer Swan.
A different story will be done once Shojin and I sort out something.
(http://imageshack.us/a/img853/9751/ogy3.png)
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(https://imagizer.imageshack.us/v2/335x494q90/537/in94Fw.jpg)
(https://imagizer.imageshack.us/v2/348x494q90/911/ND2X32.jpg)
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Found this when I was clearing stuff out. It was going to be the ending to the first part of Mavericks and rouges but it diluted the ending too much so it got scrapped it last minute.
(http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u277/TrentJayir/mavnr_zps9a124ff7.jpg)
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Here's a monstrosity:
This is why I needed an extension on the Clown Princess vs. Pixel Princess comic. I spent too long on this idea of a royal summit then realized I didn’t know where to go from page 4. So I had to start all over with a different idea.
(http://36.media.tumblr.com/c22b48490b916b59c084cf4c1998efec/tumblr_nh019g2SFO1qj8kz4o4_1280.jpg) (http://40.media.tumblr.com/c0c7a1bf65fe8d7ec05e4cbf34cf76f5/tumblr_nh019g2SFO1qj8kz4o2_1280.jpg)(http://41.media.tumblr.com/a04192d72b2aec0b262f1cff105392be/tumblr_nh019g2SFO1qj8kz4o3_1280.jpg)(http://40.media.tumblr.com/f43251dee5c219ded3fa8fa28eee0e6a/tumblr_nh019g2SFO1qj8kz4o1_1280.jpg)
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Oh man, I feel for you, Britt (I hope it's okay if I call you that)! I love the art, especially your expressions (including whole body expressiveness, which you really rock). I do hope we get to see more fully-fleshed-out comics from you, because I love your stuff to death!
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Sorry in advance for reviving this thread that hasn't been posted in for a year, but I was talking a bit in the chat about comic battles I was never able to finish due to my life being an endless sludge of busy, and wanted to put up some small excerpts of battles from each thing I still have on file. A lot of this work is extremely old, from 9 to 5 years old, so excuse the ugliness.
(http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e84/Psykosys/Swallow_01_zpsdvuhtsvf.jpg)
(http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e84/Psykosys/Swallow_06_zpsm1910azn.jpg)
(http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e84/Psykosys/Swallow_07_zpshkwcaacc.jpg)
Robert vs Swallow (2007 I think).
(http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e84/Psykosys/VSAndrewpg07_zpsyzyfnoqy.jpg)
(http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e84/Psykosys/VSAndrewpg08_zpsqdcfz5i9.jpg)
Robert vs Andrew (2009)
(http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e84/Psykosys/Andrepg3pre_zps3uh2aeki.jpg)
Robert vs Andre (near the end of 2009)
Then I think I dropped off the face of VOID and tried to make a return in roughly around 2011 by battling Charlie's Luna, but got too busy again to finish it. especially because it was ambitious and 50 pages.
(http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e84/Psykosys/vslunapg03_zpsnhmr08dq.jpg)
(http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e84/Psykosys/vslunapg01_zpsm5b0epzy.jpg)
(http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e84/Psykosys/vslunapg04_zpsfrninjxu.jpg)
(http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e84/Psykosys/vslunapg07_zpshfihp6de.jpg)
(http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e84/Psykosys/vslunapg09_zpsurkkmsfk.jpg)
(http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e84/Psykosys/vslunapg28_zps9vdaykrk.jpg)(http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e84/Psykosys/vslunapg29_zpsvzenvlmc.jpg)
(http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e84/Psykosys/vslunapg30__zps9j2to7ng.jpg)
(http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e84/Psykosys/vslunapg31_zpsochifxr2.jpg)
Robert vs Luna (2011)
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Holy fucking hell airlight, I've missed seeing your work around here. That page dump makes up for allllll the lost time!
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Airlight was a master of art back then, and he's a master now.
Just hot damn man! These are all awesome!
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Yeah, that is SOOOOO UGLY FUCK YOU AIRLIGHT YOU TALENTED, ATTRACTIVE, WONDERFUL PIECE OF SHIT! <3
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fucking hell how u do dis
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THE FATED BATTLE THAT NEVER WAS ;o;.
Its still so pretty.
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Back earlier this year Magi and I were going to do a collab BB together with Mammon and Wizzie bumping into each other again since he returned to Void City. However, fate decided that they would meet again in the Heavy Weight finals so thats what happened. So this comic is no longer canon and got scrapped.
Particularly proud of some of these pages though, they were a real challenge to work out how to colour and visually display sound in a noisy nightclub with a medium that doesn’t have audible sound.
Page from an earlier scene:
(https://67.media.tumblr.com/16ae169640e5caa1e22edfd5f105b918/tumblr_obyjl8n9xU1qe8b2uo7_540.jpg)
Pages from the main scene:
(https://67.media.tumblr.com/c52cfec0b768d7350d715c57d3461ddc/tumblr_obyjl8n9xU1qe8b2uo1_540.jpg)
(https://67.media.tumblr.com/439e3743dd9ea0e6948f4769f1e638d3/tumblr_obyjl8n9xU1qe8b2uo2_540.jpg)
(https://67.media.tumblr.com/1826479d1fee76a6e140a5e5ed7deb72/tumblr_obyjl8n9xU1qe8b2uo3_540.jpg)
(https://65.media.tumblr.com/77322c8416d6a7fd3b27a8c0f86e5e2e/tumblr_obyjl8n9xU1qe8b2uo4_540.jpg)
(https://66.media.tumblr.com/be4c5f4dbe09634411a4e23838c2f303/tumblr_obyjl8n9xU1qe8b2uo5_540.jpg)
(https://67.media.tumblr.com/c5c4c0aebc1846ba380b26147bb92b0f/tumblr_obyjl8n9xU1qe8b2uo6_540.jpg)
(https://66.media.tumblr.com/2f5e68e138718854acab3178e17c1272/tumblr_obyjl8n9xU1qe8b2uo8_540.jpg)
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Aww man, those are some fantastic pages!
Least they met back up during Heavyweight. Couldn't have asked for a more perfect way to finish it.
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Mocking up ideas for a battle with Otakutaylors Tsumi once upon a time that I had to scrap because Mimi vs Mr. Creamy happened, so there'd be ZERO reason for Mimi to like ice cream anymore, much less let herself go. Still, it was an interesting idea!
(http://orig11.deviantart.net/e105/f/2016/229/2/d/tsumi__fattie_by_kozispoon-daeboyz.png)
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So, this isn't exactly a deleted scene, but even though the Invitational tournament didn't require an intro story, I still did a 1 page intro for Shizana before the tournament, just so I could gauge how long it would take me to complete pages and if I could really deal with the week-long deadlines.
It never got posted, but I put in a lot of other people's characters and didn't want the cameos to go to waste, so I thought I'd post it here ^_^
(https://65.media.tumblr.com/a7bd2bd9071a8a823ef1b8a84d52f7b0/tumblr_ocbbb26Qz41rzdr7ro1_1280.png)
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Purely ran out of upload time on my slow ass internet for this to be included in the comic. A cover page!
(https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/5333180/cover_page_vsGossamer.png)
I have quite a few sketchy pages that were cut purposefully from when I did my story re-haul and some that were simply incomplete, I'm still debating whether to post them or not.
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an original 2nd part to Arena/Crikey's breakup where it becomes more of an official break up as Crikey originally and incorrectly worded that she needed a break from everyone (and the Karrin hookup initially happens after the rooftop scene) ((should be 3 pages))
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(https://pre00.deviantart.net/b231/th/pre/f/2017/256/c/c/screen_shot_2017_08_30_at_1_53_05_am_by_pyrasterran-dbnclgx.png)
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(https://orig00.deviantart.net/9218/f/2017/256/2/5/screen_shot_2017_09_01_at_1_50_38_am_by_pyrasterran-dbnclor.png)
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(https://orig00.deviantart.net/03a0/f/2017/256/8/1/screen_shot_2017_09_03_at_6_29_01_am_by_pyrasterran-dbnclil.png)
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ohhhh dramatic! poor Arena's broken heart!
it didnt even occur to me we could post cancelled holiday collabs here. heres the one I was gonna collab with eglesugha for Valentines day but it fell apart.
(http://i67.tinypic.com/311kgtf.jpg)
(http://i64.tinypic.com/2dv4xft.jpg)
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If we're posting canceled/deleted holiday scenes, here's one I wished got in
(https://i.gyazo.com/1cc7dcba6a8187a260762dc1c621fd40.png)
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Now that votings done I can post the scenes I had to cut for time/efficiency in The Devil Made Me Do It
(http://i64.tinypic.com/io2f5l.jpg)
(http://i65.tinypic.com/de8rnn.jpg)
(http://i67.tinypic.com/2u93n1i.jpg)
BONUS: the "superfluous" sexy panel I had to cut
(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/362827976112603138/370020525294092289/2sexy.jpg)
BONUS BONUS: The page I tried to draw completely shitfaced
(http://i64.tinypic.com/i6wepz.jpg)
drunk shen is a v good artist
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incomplete holiday collab pages:
Joey Lesday Grahl returns from a long trip in Hell, having a telepathic conversation with Amber Miller. He can't find Jason Miller anywhere in Hell. He refuses her money and wants to comfort her, she says to focus on Lily's situation, of which he's unaware of Lily's new marriage
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another deleted Joey scene because unfortunately i had to stick to the rules i made- if you default on secret santa i won't accept your holiday collab pages. sorry sugha =(
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