Banchero Bandit vs. aRc_
Critiques & Comments
wahay
3 comments
# 20
Posted:
Apr 8 2006, 02:17 AM
Vinnie, I can already tell there is a fine line between the leet you want aRc_ to use and the leet everyone will pair him with anyway. It appears hard to establish a direct connection with how \"leety\" you want aRc_ to be. Some people might do a full blown |-|@®|)kØ®3 1337 with him just to establish it. :/
# 19
Posted:
Apr 4 2006, 08:33 AM
Siete that was a good read!!! Compared to your last, it has more motion in it. I like the fact you seem to be researching for CCC story that I assume vinnie have, and you have better sense of composition too. It needs more works as in terms of paneling and background (kinda scarce! give variations, dont just slab colors )but overall, cool
we should battle sometime!
vinnie: that was cool actually! it really kinda gives off a vibe of MMORPG, and your panels reminds me of storyboards, but overall I have to give my points to siete. Your art is stylistically better than his, but I enjoyed reading his more. Better luck next time!
we should battle sometime!
vinnie: that was cool actually! it really kinda gives off a vibe of MMORPG, and your panels reminds me of storyboards, but overall I have to give my points to siete. Your art is stylistically better than his, but I enjoyed reading his more. Better luck next time!
# 18
Posted:
Apr 3 2006, 05:10 PM
I\'m going to have to say that Siete\'s fight is step up in both quality and entertainment over his last fight. Your fight was more dynamic and more interesting that it was last time. Good improvement. I hope to see you keep improving.
Vinnie, your backgrounds were crude. Your characters were only moderately better drawn, and your comic overall lacked the sense of motion and action that Siete\'s fight had in it. Aside from the art itself, your humour was kind of bland, but I\'ll admit that internet humour isn\'t my cup of tea - and even when it is, it\'s only funny the first time you hear it. Try harder next time.
I feel like this isn\'t even a contest. Siete\'s entry was better drawn, more entertaining, and longer.
Vinnie, your backgrounds were crude. Your characters were only moderately better drawn, and your comic overall lacked the sense of motion and action that Siete\'s fight had in it. Aside from the art itself, your humour was kind of bland, but I\'ll admit that internet humour isn\'t my cup of tea - and even when it is, it\'s only funny the first time you hear it. Try harder next time.
I feel like this isn\'t even a contest. Siete\'s entry was better drawn, more entertaining, and longer.
# 17
Posted:
Apr 3 2006, 12:11 PM
Vinnie: perhaps that was a tad harsh, perhaps it wasn\'t. Please put more effort into your next comic and work on your writing.
# 16
Posted:
Apr 3 2006, 12:09 PM
Siete: This is better than your last fight easily. Your plot isn\'t that bad, the art is better. Generally it\'s ok. Nice work. Hope you improve even more.
Vinnie: What? This is awful. Are you just being lazy, because I hear people rant and rave about you. And seriously, the ancient internetbabble joke isn\'t very humorous anymore. n00blet? Your comedy must be sent by the gods themselves. I sure haven\'t seen this concept of l33t a million times.
Vinnie: What? This is awful. Are you just being lazy, because I hear people rant and rave about you. And seriously, the ancient internetbabble joke isn\'t very humorous anymore. n00blet? Your comedy must be sent by the gods themselves. I sure haven\'t seen this concept of l33t a million times.
# 15
Posted:
Apr 2 2006, 07:25 PM
Thanks a lot for the crits and comments! They\'re really useful! And yeah, I\'ll try to come out with something new for the next battle, Pi! I\'m really liking Void, I do feel that I\'m improving.
Vinnie! Your comic was fun! And thanks again for accepting this battle, you know I\'m a big fan of your stuff!
Vinnie! Your comic was fun! And thanks again for accepting this battle, you know I\'m a big fan of your stuff!
# 14
Posted:
Apr 2 2006, 03:04 PM
(...gets up...pushes chair in...walks away from computer)
# 13
Posted:
Apr 1 2006, 11:57 PM
It seems like anything I wanted to say has been said, so I\'ll condense it like canned milk.
Vinnie: spend more time with your fights, dude. I know that you\'ve got some skills, but you\'ve got to push your boundaries. Work more detail into your art, work more creativity into your writing. Void is to LEARN, not screw around. You\'re with the big boys now, play like one.
Siete: a big improvement over your last fight, I was rather impressed. Very creative with the addition of CCC City into the mix, and Vinnie seemed in character the whole time. All in all, I\'d say that this was a good start for you. That means it\'s time to experiment and push past your comfort zone. Way to improve, bud.
Vinnie: spend more time with your fights, dude. I know that you\'ve got some skills, but you\'ve got to push your boundaries. Work more detail into your art, work more creativity into your writing. Void is to LEARN, not screw around. You\'re with the big boys now, play like one.
Siete: a big improvement over your last fight, I was rather impressed. Very creative with the addition of CCC City into the mix, and Vinnie seemed in character the whole time. All in all, I\'d say that this was a good start for you. That means it\'s time to experiment and push past your comfort zone. Way to improve, bud.
# 12
Posted:
Apr 1 2006, 12:41 AM
Siete, I didn\'t wait the COMBO BREAKER! hahahahahah! XD, amazing!
# 11
Posted:
Mar 31 2006, 08:47 PM
:HEADEXPLODES:
# 10
Posted:
Mar 31 2006, 07:16 PM
Well, I liked Siete\'s comic MUUUUUUCH better than his last one.
# 9
Posted:
Mar 31 2006, 07:02 PM
Damn wei you stole the words outta my mouth. lol
Siete godamn, Best fight yet. I love how you threw Vinnies CCC city in the mix. Much loves to you man.
Siete godamn, Best fight yet. I love how you threw Vinnies CCC city in the mix. Much loves to you man.
# 8
Posted:
Mar 31 2006, 05:23 PM
Vinnie: this fight is even worse than your last one......the only thing in this fight that is any good is the redition of your own fighter......same tired old jokes and a total lack of attention to anything else except for your own character....this really doesn\'t look like 4 weeks worth of effort...more like a day or two
Siete: this comic is a better effort on your part...still nothing to write home about..... but better...and you at least attempted to portray your opponent in an interesting fashion and mesh your storylines
I scored you both pretty low for these....but Siete came out on top for more of an effort and a better final product overall
Siete: this comic is a better effort on your part...still nothing to write home about..... but better...and you at least attempted to portray your opponent in an interesting fashion and mesh your storylines
I scored you both pretty low for these....but Siete came out on top for more of an effort and a better final product overall
# 7
Posted:
Mar 30 2006, 11:59 PM
uploaded just in time!! woooh!
# 6
Posted:
Mar 6 2006, 08:31 PM
I hope you guys actually do something interesting instead of some generic fight.
# 5
Posted:
Mar 3 2006, 10:31 AM
Yeah, I really want to see what Siete can come up with. I wanna see you two really push the limits of your skills. Don\'t do a half-assed job here guys. GOOD LUCK!
# 4
Posted:
Mar 3 2006, 01:22 AM
VEEEEEE DO A MILLION PAGES OF AWESOME This stuff should be easy compared to what you\'re capable of !
# 3
Posted:
Mar 2 2006, 10:50 PM
thanks a lot for accepting Vinnie!!
now lets make a good battle!
now lets make a good battle!
# 2
Posted:
Mar 2 2006, 06:52 PM
Alright you two, you\'ve got alot to make up for, I want to see a beyond awesome fight from the both of you, no more pulled punches!
# 1
Posted:
Mar 2 2006, 06:23 PM
I sure the results of this fight will give everyone a lot to ponder.
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
4 weeks
Ended:
Apr 7th, 2006
Votes Cast:
50
Page Views:
2334
Winner:
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