Bane vs. Iggy and Pongo
Critiques & Comments
# 32
Posted:
May 8 2007, 08:27 AM
wow that\'s cool V.... i don\'t know what in the U.K but i know in scotland theres castles, you should draw some castles for your sense for your comics man. so are you going around the world, i think you should try the place with history. That what i would do if i could travel just some ideas try mid evi thing they used on the enemy and maybe Bane got traped and was held for like days and hours and get away but a small hole he was making in the wall or jump and climbed out to a window.....and you should use some of the fighter on void as the people(enemys). have fun in scotland and don\'t get to crazy with there Beer hahaa.....
# 31
Posted:
May 8 2007, 03:26 AM
Hey thanks C-r-ill-er for that. I really appretiate the advise. I see what you mean about the lack of story though and i will work on a beyond battle. As for my first stop, i am currently in the U.K. then off to Scotland in a week then to Amsterdam for my 21st bday. WAHOOO!!!
# 30
Posted:
May 7 2007, 09:48 AM
Vehemence i think what you should do is you should draw some sence when you travel and just make a comic about you (Bane) going around and do thing like buying striper or what not and getting traped in a building that\'s about to come down you know travel but put Bane in the sence and make it with action and what not you know what i\'m saying, i think that would be a great Beyond battle just do in sence,1st sence your leaving, 2nd never your on the road and run in to a gang that ben hurting a small town, something like that man.... well just try to gave something man but good luck in your travels and dude study other art to make your better and better don\'t forget this Draw hard and Battle well.... peace man oh what your 1st stop?
# 29
Posted:
May 6 2007, 08:43 PM
Both of these were kind of \"meh\" for me, entertainment-wise. There wasn\'t a lot of material to Iggy & Pongo\'s, and Bane\'s was predictable and uninteresting.
Art-wise, the entries are about the same. Sphinx\'s coloring looks better than Vehemence\'s, but Vehemence\'s rendering looks better than Sphinx\'s. This looks like a pretty close battle to me.
And as funny as it was, I think Pongo looks sexier without the bloody meat wad taped to his metal man-skirt.
Art-wise, the entries are about the same. Sphinx\'s coloring looks better than Vehemence\'s, but Vehemence\'s rendering looks better than Sphinx\'s. This looks like a pretty close battle to me.
And as funny as it was, I think Pongo looks sexier without the bloody meat wad taped to his metal man-skirt.
# 28
Posted:
May 6 2007, 11:20 AM
Hmm..... Wow Hiemie\'s right. I think even if you win, Pongo, you need to pick something else. This wasn\'t a scar or a limb match.... an yet you scarred your opponent and took a ... \"limb.\" You were supposed to take part of his property. I think the whole penis-taped-to-pongo thing is a no-go.
Thank God.
Thank God.
# 27
Posted:
May 4 2007, 08:42 PM
I thought this was a trophy match, not a scar match.
# 26
Posted:
May 3 2007, 01:35 AM
hey thnxfor the comments guys. I hate to sound like im making an excuse but im backpacking europe and have no access to colours or inkers at all, cause im living in the country. But i definatly understand your point, about it look unprofessional. This is my last battle until the end of the year because I am moving on to start traveling, but ll keep drawing and try to post stuff when i can. thnx guys and gals.
cheers
Vehem
cheers
Vehem
# 25
Posted:
May 2 2007, 06:21 PM
I ussually just read and vote and don\'t post but I think i\'m going to.
So Bane\'s fight I thought was pretty good quility wise. I think your drawings are good but unfortunatly I think the fact that its just in pencil makes it look really unprofesional if you inked or added color i think it would make a big diffrence still though I do like the drawings. As far as creativity and entertainment though I just think you need to put more thought into that it seemed a little generic. Overall I thought the comic was pretty good though.
As for the Iggy and Pongo comic I think your coloring looks good but the drawings themselfs I don\'t like as much.As for the story The whole pee sending the guy flying thing I thought was kinda weird but the trouphy you took was halrious.
So Bane\'s fight I thought was pretty good quility wise. I think your drawings are good but unfortunatly I think the fact that its just in pencil makes it look really unprofesional if you inked or added color i think it would make a big diffrence still though I do like the drawings. As far as creativity and entertainment though I just think you need to put more thought into that it seemed a little generic. Overall I thought the comic was pretty good though.
As for the Iggy and Pongo comic I think your coloring looks good but the drawings themselfs I don\'t like as much.As for the story The whole pee sending the guy flying thing I thought was kinda weird but the trouphy you took was halrious.
# 24
Posted:
May 2 2007, 05:57 PM
Vehen, man you did just fine is just that Sphinx just use a style that make people likes it\'s crazy, but dude really to you did nice...
Sphinx, you did good but your style will backfirer on you in time because people that use computers are cleaning up there comics and they look a little better, but it was good colors that you picked was smart.
Sphinx, you did good but your style will backfirer on you in time because people that use computers are cleaning up there comics and they look a little better, but it was good colors that you picked was smart.
# 23
Posted:
May 2 2007, 04:19 PM
You maybe wanna give some insight into why, Sabu? Any reasons in particular? Anything thy could do better next time? Anything you can say to be constructive?
# 22
Posted:
May 2 2007, 03:28 PM
Didn\'t like either of them, to be frank. : /
# 21
Posted:
May 2 2007, 03:28 PM
Didn\'t like either of them, to be frank. : /
# 20
Posted:
May 2 2007, 02:38 AM
thanks skullcap, i really appreciate your help and am glad to see you got it up and running for me. This is just so everyone knows, but i am in a small town backpacking europe, and thought i\'d do a batlle whilst i was saving $$$ and am in transit. So we have one comp, and it crashed :S... so there was no chance of contacting anyone. But all good hopefully i can get some votes now ...
cheers
cheers
# 19
Posted:
May 1 2007, 05:50 PM
Bane\'s fight added. I gotta say man.... resize your images please. They don\'t have to be 1240 wide. They are just fine at 600 (like I made them here) or 800 maybe even, but damn i could only look at one panel without resizing. If you need help, please ask someone or go to the forum, or ask one of us to do it after you upload or before they go up. If this was just a result of the computer crash, then ignore this. Glad you got an entry in man. This will at least take away the default.
# 18
Posted:
May 1 2007, 12:52 PM
I\'m gonna wait for you bane before I vote! Good luck :ooo
# 17
Posted:
May 1 2007, 12:40 PM
He just contacted me. Hes going to send it to me, and I\'ll do what I can to get it uploaded as a late entry. He will have missed some points, but wont get a default now. In the future, if something happens, even 24 hours before hand.... do whatever you can if you really don\'t want to default. Go to a friends house. Go to school. Send us an email. Let us know. I put this up a day and a half late waiting for word and got none. Which means nearly 2 and a half or 3 days that some kinda word could have been sent to us. It will be put up though, by tonight hopefully, so if anyone else wants to hold off voting, go for it.
# 16
Posted:
May 1 2007, 12:36 PM
I don\'t know why, but I\'m more so concerned about the idea of Iggy and Pongo walking around with severed genitals taped on than Bane not having his manhood. ;___;
Man, Vehemence. It really sucks that you can\'t seem to get it uploaded. Is it too late for anything to be done now? I\'ll hold off voting till I\'m sure.
Man, Vehemence. It really sucks that you can\'t seem to get it uploaded. Is it too late for anything to be done now? I\'ll hold off voting till I\'m sure.
# 15
Posted:
May 1 2007, 10:39 AM
I\'d figure that to be more of a scar match thing, but it works XD
all i have to say is ouch D:
all i have to say is ouch D:
# 14
Posted:
May 1 2007, 08:19 AM
That was funny Sphinx, it was great. Vehemence man i hope to see what you got someday.....
# 13
Posted:
May 1 2007, 08:02 AM
Man, that\'s surely a scar you will be missing =X
Great one, was that.
Great one, was that.
# 12
Posted:
May 1 2007, 07:10 AM
AHHHHHH! shit. I finished my whole comic, and spent so long doing it, and the comp at the place im staying at crashed 0ne day to go. I text (sphinx) asking him to apply for an extension but i dont think it got through in time. Is there anything I can do?
# 11
Posted:
May 1 2007, 07:09 AM
AHHHHHH! shit. I finished my whole comic, and spent so long doing it, and the comp at the place im staying at crashed 0ne day to go. I text (sphinx) asking him to apply for an extension but i dont think it got through in time. Is there anything I can do?
# 10
Posted:
May 1 2007, 07:08 AM
AHHHHHH! shit. I finished my whole comic, and spent so long doing it, and the comp at the place im staying at crashed 0ne day to go. I text (sphinx) asking him to apply for an extension but i dont think it got through in time. Is there anything I can do?
# 9
Posted:
May 1 2007, 12:30 AM
OH NO YOU DIDN\'T.
What a trophy THAT was. D:
Real critique coming later.
What a trophy THAT was. D:
Real critique coming later.
# 8
Posted:
Apr 29 2007, 11:43 PM
Ok sweet im all uploaded. Sorry for the rushed ending guys. i tried something new and i like it. im gonna try and do it for more battles i enjoy it alot more.
Give me a year to do something and ill do it in the last few days... just the way i am i guess lol.
Good luck Josh.
Cheers
Beau
Give me a year to do something and ill do it in the last few days... just the way i am i guess lol.
Good luck Josh.
Cheers
Beau
# 7
Posted:
Apr 29 2007, 10:41 PM
unless the dates on your computer messed up like crazy.... I don\'t know how thats possible. Anyways I\'ll be watching for it so I can put it up.
# 6
Posted:
Apr 29 2007, 08:44 PM
What the hell when i saw this last night it said 3 days now its three hours? if i didnt ditch my arvo class i would have defaulted!! now i gotta rush lol
# 5
Posted:
Apr 27 2007, 03:34 PM
Same as Rtv! i don\'t know if this will be a good battle but it might be who know\'s other then you guy who did the comics
# 4
Posted:
Apr 26 2007, 08:30 AM
Trophy match? Woa, i wonder who\'s taking what.
# 3
Posted:
Apr 1 2007, 05:17 PM
on like donkey kong man. HAHA your so outa your league ;P
have fun man. and if you default im gonna be on the next plane or row boat to bring the shmack down on your ass!!!
good luck man
have fun man. and if you default im gonna be on the next plane or row boat to bring the shmack down on your ass!!!
good luck man
# 2
Posted:
Apr 1 2007, 09:16 AM
I challenged Sphinx not thinking my other challenge got accepted lol but its all good im on top of things... I HOPE!!! lol come on BEAU!!! You and me mate!!! its on!! Good luck man!!
# 1
Posted:
Apr 1 2007, 08:17 AM
Oi , finish your other battle first lol
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Ended:
May 8th, 2007
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