Wolcik-This is about on par artistically as your previous stuff which is good, but you kind of made Girl look really scary haha she looked very masculine to me. I know that you can draw women fine, you do a good job on Worltex's lady friend, so it kind of caught me off guard. Maybe not making her so buff would have helped?
Kev-Artistically this was looking pretty nice, those first two pages especially were a step up for you. But dude, you really need to take on longer deadlines, I long for the day you will show me a finished comic on Void.
Now this critique goes for both of you for the story. I really didn't get into either half. While Kev's had build up, there was no resolution so I was left confused. With Wolcik's there was no build up but there was a resolution. I really get the feeling neither artist had much interest in fighting the other. Which is unfortunately what can happen with open challenges. Even though by all means it is up to you guys to make interesting comics no matter who you're fighting, I can relate to really only caring about fighting people you're interested in fighting.
Worltex vs. Girl
Critiques & Comments
# 8
Posted:
Apr 27 2009, 12:47 PM
# 7
Posted:
Apr 26 2009, 02:42 PM
Personally, I think that both artists showed a good amount of skill, but both artists were lacing in story.
Walcik, art work was pretty impressive for only two weeks, but the story seemed a little to rushed as far as the battle goes... however, it was interesting.
KevJB, I loved your black and white art! Too bad it wasn't finished, because I think you would have Walcik beat if it was two or three pages longer...
Walcik, art work was pretty impressive for only two weeks, but the story seemed a little to rushed as far as the battle goes... however, it was interesting.
KevJB, I loved your black and white art! Too bad it wasn't finished, because I think you would have Walcik beat if it was two or three pages longer...
# 6
Posted:
Apr 25 2009, 11:01 PM
Uploaded 3 pages. Too tired to have an excuse for not finishing.
# 5
Posted:
Apr 25 2009, 10:03 PM
Alright guys no foolin
I demand to see Raisins,Beer,Tits,and three to four octopi in this battle!
I demand to see Raisins,Beer,Tits,and three to four octopi in this battle!
# 4
Posted:
Apr 24 2009, 03:32 PM
Submitted. Hope I didn't miss any spelling or grammar mistakes. I wasn't going to color it, but I did anyway - took me quite some time.
KevJB hope you won't fall into recent defauling drift - I'd love to see your part
KevJB hope you won't fall into recent defauling drift - I'd love to see your part
# 3
Posted:
Apr 21 2009, 04:30 PM
There will be no deafault from my side, I have everything drawn. Now only scanning and some text and I'll be ready before deadline XD
# 2
Posted:
Apr 11 2009, 05:08 PM
ho snaps~ :O
looking forward to this~
looking forward to this~
# 1
Posted:
Apr 11 2009, 04:55 PM
glad to see you battling again Kev! Good luck you two!
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
2 weeks
Ended:
May 2nd, 2009
Votes Cast:
29
Page Views:
2126
Winner:
Wolcik
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I seriously think this is some next level shit for your coloring, you're on a good path, keep at it! the drawings were nice, but the inking looked kinda choppy in spots and too thin, mind how you resize the pages maybe? Fonts were pretty weak, hurt your quality. BLAMBOT.com or hand written plz. try to study lettering you like in other comics and apply techniques. Story was ok, it worked but didn't really go anywhere. But a good portrayal of the fight scene I think. I enjoyed the alien-pig like dude, curious what would happen next.
Kev, really liked your drawings/inks for the most part, interpretation of mr. W. was cool looking. Girls kick on the last panel looked really odd tho. The marker tones worked well when they weren't all scribbledy. Really good start, but I guess you weren't into it. Look forward to more stuff from ya!