WOW this rocks! I agree with Rhim that the inks could use a little bit of darkening, but overall the art is really pleasant.
This was cute and a fun read too, great job you guys!
A Stony-faced foe / Delighla and Kazue L. Burns
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# 6
Posted:
May 3 2017, 11:20 PM
# 5
Posted:
Apr 27 2017, 08:48 AM
I loved this omg
# 4
Posted:
Apr 26 2017, 02:25 PM
This was really cute! I think the one thing that stood out to me was that the inking seems like it's a bit too light. It comes off as more dark grey than black, which looks a little strange in areas where the colors are darker than the "black" lines. Using levels and threshold adjustments in Photoshop (or whatever program you're using) could fix this, or, if you're coloring digitally, turning the layer with the inks to multiply and placing it above the color layers and making sure you completely fill in areas of shadow with the color of the object. Otherwise the colors are super nice. It was fun to see these very actiony characters in this silly almost slap-stick situation XD
# 3
Posted:
Apr 26 2017, 03:04 AM
PRFFFFFRRRRTTTT
Kazue, you clueless klutz ^^
can you not hear the villainy of Delighia
Kazue, you clueless klutz ^^
can you not hear the villainy of Delighia
# 2
Posted:
Apr 25 2017, 10:35 AM
ooo
# 1
Posted:
Apr 25 2017, 10:24 AM
YOOOOOOOOOOO
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Honestly in that situation I would also be all like "dog!"