Hey guys this is my Danihg Zuhn Bagoon! Because it is a sketch so nothing here is not really high quality but should be enough for anyone to have input on what i should do or what I'm lacking here in the character design. Danihg has the appearance of a demon, he is not a demon but an ordriey meaning dream dragon. Ordrieys are kind of like a mix of a manticore and a minotaur but are neither of which. They are related to humans, descended from humans but are too both half dragon and half faerie. No one knows why they are so closely related, so close that the ordrieys can easily interbreed with humans, genetics depending on who is the mother and the father can end up with bad genes. All ordrieys can sleep off poison no matter the dosage within 30 minutes or less and can eat as much food as they weigh. AN ordriey who weighs 150 lbs can eat 150 lbs of food. afterwards they sleep 24 7. Ordrieys become more resistant to cold whether it be natural or a spell, they do no good in the heat, easily get overheated, heatsroke can happen in 70 fahrenheit. Body heat in ordrieys is 110 degrees fahrenheit(females)115 degrees in males. Ordrieys hate getting wet. The reason for that is they become more susceptible to fungal infections. They are susceptible to madness and charms. No one knows the average height ordrieys can grow. Most ordrieys live up to 1'000 years or more. Ordrieys are fully grown at a hundred years of age. Ordriey males usually are the ones who give birth and not the females. Both genders can birth young.
Danihg is a young 15 year old ordriey who stands at 6 feet and weighs 150 lbs. Ordrieys as young as Danihg are extremey rare(20 ordriey youngsters left in the ordriey race), 50'000 adult ordrieys, most ordrieys are over 500 years or more, children being so rare are and seeing a young one is like seeing a ghost. Danihg has been blamed, rejected, feared and alone most of his life. Upon someone offering a friendly hand, showing affection, helping or trying to be his friend he will become stiff, socially awkward, shy and will attempt to get away from the person. Oftentimes he will grin nervously and may even blush but when he does move away from them he then behaves sad and dejected and if somebody finds him in the middle of negatively talking of himself all alone and attempts to say anything to Dan, he will have a sudden outburst of anger usually whipping his tail, flapping his wings (if his wings are present at the time), biting, yelling, punching and stomping his hooves. Stinger has of course poison but it's the special kind that puts you to sleep like a tranquilizer. After the outburst he ends up falling to his knees sobbing. At this moment he is easy to manipulate and easy to comfort. When Danihg is comforted he usually will fall asleep anywhere, on the ground, flying, hanging, even in water or in the arms of whoever was the comforter. It would be rare to see Danihg happy if anyone manged to make him feel happy, he may follow the person and talk to them. He normally is very serious, may sound strained and cracks when speaking(voice cracks when excited)
Um I realized I forgot to add his jewelry, his necklace and his bracelet. His jewelry is very important and must never forget them! They are magical, enchanted jewelry, his bracelet prevents him from being possessed by spirits, demons or whatever is capable of doing so, his necklace has a chrystal charm that allows anything to possess him. When Dan wears both of them he is able to have complete control over the possessor of his body. Another thing he's also a girl/boy but preferably a boy for the moment. Anyone can have Danihg as either gender, don't care. So here is the other sketch.
Here is Bahn Rue Kahone who's a lone ordriey werewolf who's interested in young ordrieys for mates. He stands at 7 feet, age 60 and weighs 260 lbs. This is what he kinda looks like when he's in his werewolf form.
Is that a little creepy or just weird? Reason why there's no suit on the sheet is because that won't be happening until much later or sooner? Maybe? Ah never mind that.
Bahn is or was a part of a werewolf pack known as Qilin Gang. Blue werewolves that change according to the moon phases. Since the day he left the pack a small red skinny bony demon named Skweggon has been following and causing misfortune everywhere they go. Bahn hates it, hates it so much that he wants to get to Void City to rid of the pesky being and have a better life. He wants to be the alpha of a pack, to have a young or teen ordriey as his mate, to have his own territory to rule. Once he has this accomplished he will find the Qilin Gang, demand Sanloke and battle him to prove he better than he is. To choose a teen ordriey he will fight him or her to see if she's good enough. After fighting her he will bite her to try to change her into a werewolf if she doesn't change a werewolf bite can give diseases that may kill. Moonphase fever, the shrieks, Qilin rot. They are horrible diseases. Moonphase fever causes you to go whacko like a werewolf when the moon is out and you get high fever. Within three weeks you change partially into a werewolf and suddenly drop dead. The shrieks cause you shake and laugh like a madman until you eventually become paralyzed. This happens over In two weeks. Qilin rot causes your body to decay. First your hair falls out then your skins slaws off like sloppy joe and your muscles fall apart like pulled pork. Ooo delicious! Um yeah that's kinda disgusting. You also have the appearance like an undead werewolf. This decay happens in one month. Here's Bahn's design sheet.
Profile of Bahn, not sure what I'm going to use this one for. This is what I can sketch and paint within 15 minutes and that was with no thought. Been having quite some trouble of how to do their intro stories which I kinda need help with them. I mean I know their stories quite clearly because I've written stories all about them and all. So what I really want is to have in comics. I do do comics just I need to get better at my skills.
Thank you everyone for helping me solving my pic not showing up problems!
Rue Mue Kahone is an ordriey and a creep. Innocent by looks and gets away with naughty things all the time such as groping womens breasts and butts. He stands at 10 feet, age 24(considered one of the young ones) and weighs over 340 lbs.His secret is that he murdered his wife and only child by accident. He does not know his own strength. Over and over again and again he repeats them not ever knowing why someone gets seriously injured or dies just from grabbing and shaking them or punching or throwing them out of anger, frustration, and confusion. He is also depressed, sad that he killed his only family that was dearest to him. He killed them in the manner of choking and throwing them out the window(his wife died cracking her skull on the concrete outside, daughter died of suffocation.) because they wanted to leave the house and go looking for animals and he didn't want to be alone. After killing them he was sent to prison but within two days he escaped by eating the metal bars and stone. He can eat anything that has a surface even if it is sharp. He can chomp through diamond like butter and bend steel as if it was taffy. Rue escapes prison and ends up in hiding alleys and moves on from village, town and city. He on the move constantly to avoid being caught again, his last goal is reach Void City where he believes he will be welcome and never to be thrown back into prison. He still currently wears his prison suit. Here is Rue.
And here he is when he's not wearing his suit.