Ultra 88 vs. Elle

Ultra 88 vs. Elle

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shaneoid
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8 comments
# 6   Posted: Oct 4 2015, 07:52 AM
Well, with little knowledge of any back story, I quickly got in to what's going on, so it flowed well. There's some really cool perspective work happening, especially when the action kicks in, page 6 looked like a mix of Where's Wally meets Mad Max! Great action in that one. Maybe the scenes in the office with Ms. Blonde could have been improved with some dramatic perspective, thought this also worked juxtaposed with the brutal action scenes. The story and art make me want to see more, good stuff!

Cracking Skulls
Artist
354 comments
# 5   Posted: Oct 1 2015, 08:30 PM
TDK: Your solid black ink on the first 4 pages are looking pretty snazzy, bro! I also wanna say how I'm super impressed on how you pull off the military part of your comics so nicely, it really puts you in the mood of the scene and action! My only suggestion for the future is, since I notice some shaky, disconnected, or hairlines in your inking, to keep practicing confident and single strokes for your backgrounds and characters. Backgrounds are definitely improving in this comic, but yeah like I said, try that out. Little details like more cracks, scratch marks, little pebbles on the ground, etc could help when it comes to locations like where they were fighting.

Excited to see more from you, good work overall!

Ten Dead Kings
Artist
269 comments
# 4   Posted: Sep 29 2015, 12:28 AM
Oh dammit I just realized that I missed the last page while uploading:

Herr http://imgur.com/PgwaycN

or

http://orig14.deviantart.net/a1d7/f/2015/272/f/b/page_9_by_tdkgunghoul-d9bbiws.jpg

PyrasTerran
Artist
1512 comments
# 3   Posted: Sep 28 2015, 08:42 AM
damn, lettering is a game of life or death

graphicDREAMER
Artist
22 comments
# 2   Posted: Sep 8 2015, 07:07 PM
yep lettering as we speak catch you later ;D

Animeshen
Artist
1490 comments
# 1   Posted: Sep 7 2015, 08:19 PM
OH!! nice, this is perfect!! arent you in another fight too, graphic? haha way to jump right in! good luck!

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