Me fuggin too.

Daaaaang, this is close. I kinda made a \'waaaah?\' face when I saw the pecentages. I jitter for the end of this to come.

Both of your have a black and white look, but I am a huge fan or pen work and a sketched look, my own bias at work there.

Both are entertaining- both interesting characters.
Berlin is creative in literary ideas- but you need to find a better way to incorporate them into your panels.

I\'m loving Berlins story, but I\'m also digging the style Ashes used throughout his(her?) pages.

Nice work you two.

Feel free to use that.

This is a close ass fight, yo.

But I think the beyond the battle that happens after this will be fine starting with the BagLady crawling out of the Horrible Horrible bag...yep.

Intersting Mr. Poe, Interesting. I wouldent doubt there could be more than one of Ashes. Seems logical as vauge as she is.

I enjoyed both equally and gave you each equal votes. :3

BP: Nice art, a little messy- but nothing too bad. Panel struction was kinda bland, had more of a long comic-strip feel to it than a comic book. Try using different panel placement.

sdsj: Your style is grungy and dark, which works very well for your character. Story was a bit simplistic, but in all it was fun.

I had a question about what you thought about there being more than one Fear Hate Elemental and also it being in Auschwitz?

Y\'know what\'s real annoying about those sketch marks? I actually fixed them...I just didn\'t repost...ah well...too late now...

Good work Berlin Poe, I like your story, and the end was cool! (though ours are a little different in baggage handling!) I like some of your compositions specifically page 4 panel 2. You might want to watch your perspective a bit and your pages seem to have pencil lines that aren\'t fully taken out, (watch your levels?) Otherwise I\'d say thumbs up if I could vote on it!

So, this is \"The Soup Kitchen\" Act two...Act three is going to be a beyond the battle and four is BagLady V Paige. So that we are all clear...

Well, I\'ve uploaded 4 pages and a cover. Have at thee! I cant wait to see your pages Poe.

Okay, I\'m all uploaded.

Seven pages one cover. I didn\'t think I\'d be done so quick.

Well I\'m trucking on this. I have only one maybe two pages and it\'s done. Five or Six pages one cover.

Yep.

Hungry, hungry, horrible, horrible bags!!

Fun for the whole family, in stores near hell...

I think so too...interesting to say the least.

whoa gonna be awsome