Dipuc vs. Dood

Dipuc vs. Dood

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JoshuaEliGilley
Artist
462 comments
# 12   Posted: Mar 1 2010, 09:42 PM
Botha you nice job here.

Kent yours was just a little more satisfying on the whole. humorous characterization and drawings throughout. Dipuc's hate really shined here. I like that they acted like gentlemen and respected each others hate. Lot's of little funny things going on like doods face on page 4 panel 2, hahaa! Even with the forced situation the dialogue still read well.

Barata your anatomy and action are on point. Great pacing/paneling and good flow.The fight was just too standard I guess, seen it before. Although you did make it look very dynamic and slick, the characters were just empty fighting shells.
It'd be cool if ya started fightin with yer robo-dude on here.

Charlie
Artist
731 comments
# 11   Posted: Feb 23 2010, 06:46 PM
Cool comics from the both of you, I think Kent's comic won me over more though on this one! Both of them were really nice though :)

Mister Kent
Artist
958 comments
# 10   Posted: Feb 23 2010, 02:26 PM
On the museum tour thing - yah, it was sorta forced, but I really wanted Dood to burst outta the wall and start killing people. :D He's so awesome like that. It's the SDT - I felt like I needed to throw a little extra D in there.

Baratacom! I loved the colors - I wish I would've colored mine, but they sure wouldn't be as well done as yours. I like how you made Dipuc all blurry with speed - that was a nice visual touch. This was quite enjoyable, great work.

JAZ
Artist
114 comments
# 9   Posted: Feb 23 2010, 12:44 PM
Kent: I really like your writing, man. I think it flowed nicely after Dood came into the picture, but I think the way they met was a bit random. Your art also seems to get better with each comic you do, keep it up!
Btw, that prehensile tongue freaks me the fuck out hahaha.

Bara: I was a little disappointed with this comic, after how much you brought it in round one. It’s too short for me, and was the typical meet and fight type of story. Still, I loved the crazy neon coloring.

I don’t want either of you to die because I’m interested in seeing where you would take these characters! D8

Minteh
Global Moderator
275 comments
# 8   Posted: Feb 23 2010, 09:40 AM
Kent, man, this is what I wanted to see.  I'm SO GLAD you stepped it up from the first round. Granted I think you had more to work with so you could really let yourself go for it.

Bara, as much as I love the colour and style, it's just too short for me.

galvo
Artist
146 comments
# 7   Posted: Feb 22 2010, 08:45 AM
kent -- CLEAN CUT MAN -- very clean style amigo.. impressive.
the story was a bit on yawning side for me, the museum tour thing just seemed too forced, as well as dood coming in, cute -- but forced.


BARA--  fuck you and yer color theory man i LOVE IT. if i could make a giant poster/canvas thing that would cover and entire wall it would totally be panel 3 on page 3, brilliant.

even though you only did 1/3 of what kent did, i gave you the win for the color theory and the movement man-- superb, much more vibrant.

Phill
Artist
895 comments
# 6   Posted: Feb 22 2010, 06:02 AM
Kent: You're getting much better at these comics dude, your panels are still a bit too up close to the characters, zoom out a bit more often plz? I wish there was more to the backgrounds as they pretty much vanished towards the end. My vote goes to you for having a more fleshed out story.

Baratacom: Not bad dude, love your blacklight colors, the action was cool as well. Not much else to this comic though, really wish you could of done more like in your last round.

Baratacom
Artist
36 comments
# 5   Posted: Feb 21 2010, 07:48 PM
Posted.

Mister Kent
Artist
958 comments
# 4   Posted: Feb 15 2010, 11:25 PM
Best of Luck Baratacom! ~
"Let the Hate Flow Through You!"
(That's my new default greeting, like "Have a nice day!")

JoshuaEliGilley
Artist
462 comments
# 3   Posted: Feb 15 2010, 04:07 PM
I can feel the surly anger!

William_Duel
Community Manager
943 comments
# 2   Posted: Feb 15 2010, 02:05 PM
Bat vs Boots.

DrasticFantastic
Artist
165 comments
# 1   Posted: Feb 15 2010, 01:59 PM
Who's rage and hate is stronger?

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