D'awww DAWWW This is such a cute comic. I love the overall flow of the story. That's a lot of characters to juggle in one single comic but it didn't feel overwhelming to be introduced to so many characters at all, you did a good job dividing up the dialogue and interactions for each person! This was a fun read and i totally wouldn't mind seeing more spider babies adventures from you <3

i died of cuteness blahh ded

I am overwhelmed with cuteness XD this was just such an adorable little side adventure you draw the sweetest little murder bugs LOL! Looks like Shizana is tied to this family now whether she likes it or not! Your artwork is basically perfect i dont even know what i would critique. Maybe the colours- when they move from the hotel to the underground caves they stay the same hues and there might have been more could be done with some armospheric light and shadow. But eleven billion points for my precious Lottie getting a role XD  ill do sonething with her one day. Great little story!

this was an overall competent and cute comic. I wish it had more of an establishing shot to get us settled in the location, because a lot of the comic seems to have very little weight to the action in part due to there being little to no landmarks to keep me vested in the movements. While I could understand why Zana's danger loving side is keeping her around the spider kids and Louise, I dont see why Shi is so okay with it, Shi for me now feels more akin to a bystander than a character. I think that can even be felt in the fact the spider children refer to shizana as mother when Shi and Zana share equal parts of their gender identity and actually were the genetic equivalent of a father with Louise giving birth to them. I think Zana's more action orientated goals and actually actively working towards something have completely shadowed Shi's more passive attitude and the fact he sorta already has what he wanted which was to be with Zana.

Poor Shizana, that experience surely shaved off some years of her life ^^ i especially liked the way you illustrated the Hivemind's progressive hold on Shizana as she dodge the babies. Panel 3 page 3 especially gave me spiderman vibes ! Great job done, Rhim !

Can't wait !! ^^

Shizana, don't you have, like, police work to do or something?

Well this was supposed to get done in March, but a lot of stuff got in the way. I ended up having to edit it down a lot and didn't get to do everything I wanted to with a certain guest-starring character :'D
BUT! It's finished! Hope you enjoy it!