We Can Rebuild Him / Invyn & Jasper
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# 8
Posted:
Sep 13 2017, 05:14 PM
Well, that is certainly an interesting take on the scar. I'd like to see more of magically powered, robot-ish Jasper (okay, I get it, he's a living computer tower) sometime in the future.
# 7
Posted:
Sep 12 2017, 08:56 AM
I like that you took the scar at hand and managed to switch it up and put a twist of bringing Jasper back. I like that Invyn was forced to use the materials around him to rebuild Jasper. I always like that he probably spent more money on a shitty desktop tower than he would of if he went looking for pumpkins at a farmers market.
# 6
Posted:
Sep 10 2017, 02:14 PM
I do like the solution you came up for the scar, I think the oddest thing for me is thr fact that there is just best buy in void but over all good job I am excited where this goes!
# 5
Posted:
Sep 10 2017, 03:58 AM
Hahaha I was half expecting a different type of large fruit, definitely did not see that coming! I do like how it still follows the candle rule; even when it's such a drastic change from the original I'm glad it still makes sense within your storytelling.
# 4
Posted:
Sep 9 2017, 07:05 PM
There is a lot of interesting routes this can take. Very well done I'd say. I'm curious to see what will become of this.
# 3
Posted:
Sep 8 2017, 09:51 AM
i guess we can say the scar is "he cant be a pumpkin anymore", since he was always summoned into an object i suppose theres no need for him to stay as one singular object, as long as fu is okay with it. that said im sort of shocked you went with the tower and not the monitor XD
# 2
Posted:
Sep 8 2017, 08:36 AM
honestly, void really has to sue amd for stealing their iconic design.
(Yeah, this is a pretty major change to how Jasper appeared at the end of Fu's winning comic in the scar battle! But the scar wasn't literally that he had to stay a pickle permanently, and Fu's a-okay with it, so I still feel like it hits the spirit of the scar match accurately.)
(Yeah, this is a pretty major change to how Jasper appeared at the end of Fu's winning comic in the scar battle! But the scar wasn't literally that he had to stay a pickle permanently, and Fu's a-okay with it, so I still feel like it hits the spirit of the scar match accurately.)
# 1
Posted:
Sep 8 2017, 08:34 AM
....SO MUCH POSSIBILITIES !!!! Jasper made of electronics give ideas. We shall fight very soon.
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