Neens: Great cartooning in this. Lilly's expressions are so filled with anger and frustration, it's perfect. It's a simple story and it works well. The designer in me loves how you were able to stick to a consistent grid for your layouts. I'm trying to find something to criticize, but honestly this is a fun little short comic. Maybe the comedy could have been a little more exaggerated?
Nothin: I know you can only get so much detail in on a 1 week battle, but I do wish there were more backgrounds. I think this comic could benefit from different types of shots used on the panels. Most of the shots here are Medium, without enough movement of the camera or use of dynamic shots. The style is more cartoony, so I understand that super dynamic comic book shots don't always work as well for that kind of thing.
Speed Resurrection Tournament 2018, Round 1 / Lil Lily vs. Steph
Critiques & Comments
# 4
Posted:
Jul 15 2018, 08:11 AM
# 3
Posted:
Jul 10 2018, 11:15 AM
Ohhhh mannnn. I liked these a lot. Good stuff, you two!
# 2
Posted:
Jul 10 2018, 07:39 AM
I really like how both of you came to the same conclusion that lily is just grounded instead of being dead Both are super cute!
# 1
Posted:
Jul 2 2018, 09:11 AM
I hope you both win!
Tournament Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Jul 16th, 2018
Votes Cast:
24
Page Views:
1662
Winner:
neens
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Neens: Love the style you went with here, the expressiveness of your characters is so good. The tones worked out really nicely too, everything was crystal clear. Lily's escape was especially great, the first panel on that last page is sop fun to look at.
Nothin: I really like how well you pushed this with such a simple style, it's definitely lacking in backgrounds but I didn't miss them a ton. It was fun and dramatic and I'd love to see what's next for Steph!