After checking out your commentary on this comic via tumblr, it definitely makes more sense. I can see how it would throw many off as to it being so abrupt as we are all used to your comics building to the payoff. But when you view it as the intro comic its meant to be, it definitely comes across as such. I'm so glad you're so open to sharing your sources and programs you use in order to make your comics. I hurried on over to Black Ink right after reading!
Dolly is definitely adorable in this- I espexially love how she has to slide herself down the staircase since she's so tiny. Way to crank up the cute factor. I'll have to second Puzzles comic and ask when are you going to publish comics so I can buy them and add them to my bookshelf??
The Racket at Night / Dolly Dandellion
Critiques & Comments
# 14
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Nov 8 2014, 01:05 PM
# 13
Posted:
Nov 8 2014, 12:14 PM
Ahhh, I missed voting on this, but I don't really have anything else to say than that I love it! You're an amazing artist Jackster, everytime you drop this stuff it boggles my mind that I'm not seeing you publish a million bajillion comics.
# 12
Posted:
Nov 5 2014, 10:03 AM
This was awesome and very enjoyable I have little to no crit other then I enjoyed it which is less a crit and more of a statement so "word G"
# 11
Posted:
Nov 5 2014, 10:01 AM
Christ!! How did you do those light effects? That was beautiful and entertaining as hell. <3 Loved it
# 10
Posted:
Nov 3 2014, 08:03 AM
this was cute! while I appreciate that it's short n sweet, it's almost too little. nothing to really grab me. the conflict is over as soon as it starts. your quality is nice like always though!
# 9
Posted:
Nov 2 2014, 08:20 AM
Jackster this was so precious and funny!!
# 8
Posted:
Nov 1 2014, 07:54 PM
so much cute! not much for conflict but BEAUTIFULLY drawn, I love the rainbow magic effect! great to see even a little Dolly this month!
# 7
Posted:
Nov 1 2014, 11:46 AM
que cute
# 6
Posted:
Nov 1 2014, 09:19 AM
brilliant, great comic!
# 5
Posted:
Nov 1 2014, 08:33 AM
Looks like the site no longer allows me to upload custom thumbnails! Bobo will have to fix that but I wasn't going to wait until the thumbs were working to put it up because that's dumb.
# 4
Posted:
Oct 25 2014, 09:26 PM
It's just not Halloween without Dolly <3
# 3
Posted:
Oct 24 2014, 10:17 PM
yesplz
# 2
Posted:
Oct 24 2014, 09:50 AM
DOLLY!!! <3
# 1
Posted:
Oct 24 2014, 09:41 AM
This was a 4-page intro comic I was working on from last year, but stopped working on it after page 2 due to.............. things.................
Since it's now Month of the Dead and Dolly has been inactive for most of the month (mainly because of writer's block), I thought I'd go finish up this comic before this month ends.
Since it's now Month of the Dead and Dolly has been inactive for most of the month (mainly because of writer's block), I thought I'd go finish up this comic before this month ends.
Beyond Battle
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Nov 7th, 2014
Votes Cast:
27
Page Views:
1241
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