ANGEL: I can understand your submission being unfinished (better than a default)... but that last page just KILLED it for me!!! \"Here\'s some chibis...\" It was almost like those pathetic bribes moms would do to suck up to a higher authority. Unfinished work is fine... but that last page is so unredeemable in my eyes! On a positive note... your art seems well-founded. I look forward to see finished rendered work.

MOOO: I think i\'m becoming a big fan of your work! Quality-wise its a big improvement on the Hobbes fight (awesome competent inking!). I found the first 2 pages of typical anime overdramatic posing (complete with falling snow, blowing hair, multiple camera angles) hilarious, with us thinking Mooo fits the scene perfectly... until of course we find out he cant understand hiragana at all! Last panel on page 2 has to be the one and only time i\'ve ever found myself attracted to a Furry. Im ashamed to admit it. but you have done the impossible. But that is of course until i find out on page4 she f-ing 7\'4\" ( = turn-off)!! But surprisingly enough, my biggest laugh came from Mooo\'s comedic startled reaction to Cherrie Fox\'s battle cry! He\'s been merely a poser throughout the comic...it such a true reaction that i can easily imagine in real life. The white space i thought was actually quite effective in most cases. Especially the panel when he gets knocked down on the last page. My only real crit would be a more conclusive ending. Eg. a shot of his bed or sumthin.

WELL DONE, BOTH (C+ PRETTY GOOD)(:

I dont have anything to add that hasnt been said but, heh heh, very silly Moo, but it made me laugh.

My apologies for the laziness of the art in this comic (and my upcoming Hobbes comic).  In the future, I\'ll strive to put a little more time into the individual pages, and the last page did come off as, well... I dunno how to even put it into words. XD

Mooo:  Dude, yours was silly and not up to snuff artistically, but it made me laugh out loud.  The height difference was so well used, and its about time somebody noticed it!  Good job dude, I liked it.

Angel: Babe I like your character, but each time I get the feeling you just get lazy, and/or procrastinate.  Seriously babe, you couldn\'t erase the lines underneath clothing?  That\'s a 2 second job there sweetheart, I really want to see you kick it up a level, you need it.

Angelidollinda: Yours was good but I didn\'t get the point of the story. But then again, I\'ll let you go since school work kept you from finishing the comic.

Mooo: This one was a tad more entertaining. I always did thought Mooo had that face of an anime-esque samurai. The quality is good as well.

Angeldollinda, please strive for a more complete entry.  In the past you\'ve only submitted rough pencils, and continue to do so.  That white space is also an issue, gotta fill it up with something be it background or effects or whatever.  On top of everything, it\'s not even finished.  Overall, I\'m very displeased with this entry.

Mooo, antoehr disappointment.  Your rematch with Phil was so full of action, but this one it comes off a bit stale.  Like Angeldollinda you also seem to have a fondness for that white space.  If possible, I\'d like to fight you in the future...a two on one with you and Kubo versus me.

Hm...I don\'t see our battle up... weird.

I will not make any jokes.  I will not make any jokes.

That\'s all right, Angel, like Floyd said, let\'s see all you\'ve got next time. ^_^

Show us all you got next time Angel. As for you Mooo, do me proud.

Uploaded... I\'m in the middle of senior projects right now, so I was only able to put up half of the sketched pages I was planning to ink... I obviously lost this one, since I got so busy. I\'m sorry Moo.. I\'ll try to make it up to you.

UPLOADED!

bertomx, im with you bro:

GO FOR BROKE YOU SORRY BABYS!!!!!!!!!

Rah! Rah! Shish boom BAH!

...or an arm..or a femur....

break a leg you two!!!

Dear God, she\'s 7\'4\"!  Thanks for offering the challenge, Cherrie, I\'ll put my all into this. ^_^

Oh it will. I promise this one will have lots of fighting... and ninjas. >=)

YEAH CHERRIE! I think this battle will be VERY good.

Keep on rocking in the free world.