PyrasTerran- Thanks! I think a groundshot would be a good idea, though I think I'll put it in the last page. She's taking the generator to a scrap yard, and I think it would be the most effective there? maybe?
Pocketmouse- Okay, I'll work on that... I think I might need a new inking pen. right now I'm using a prismacolor .01 marker that I bought 6 years ago... XD And you definitely can call dibs! It'd be amazing to fight Trixie or Merrik! *u*
Here's some progress on Page 1:
SKetch of PAge 2:
PAge 3:
PAge 3... I want to show a change from one Dimension's Void City to another... but page 2 already has a bit of an establishing shot of the wreckage.... I was wondering if I should just do a full page of the "Megapolis" Void. or Should I keep the half and half of a Ruined Void with Kepi Misting out, and megapolis void?
EDIT:: Actually I figured it out! Page 4 will be Page 3.