not complete but you've got the makings of a cool comic here; you understand composition and pacing and I would really enjoy seeing you do more Kay comics. As important as your work on page though is also your time management/budgeting; try to plan as well as you can for your next battle to make sure you don't fall into the same incompletion hole. Unexpected things will always happen, sure--my tablet stopped working properly on the last week of my recent death battle--but starting early and being diligent always helps.

Zinbi - Your fourth page is an excellent composition for a panel break, and while it could certainly use some finishing, the choice of B/W with green worked well with the characters you had to portray.  I'd recommend for practice or in your next comic, a few more wide shots and zooming the camera out on occasion, as most of the panels are body shots or closer. As well as making sure your word bubbles will fit in a bit better to the panels you plan.

Will Duel - T_T

Zinbi - I honestly love that your character Kay is just a straight up swan with all the struggles of being one, like the inability to talk and such.
The comic is unfinished so I can't really critique too much, but I suppose I would focus on tightening up your lines, at times things can be a tad ambiguous. That said I really like the color your picked for this. I think black, white, and a vibrant color really works for you!

I'm glad to see you still making comics! I was interested to see what was gonna happen next, so I hope that next time the story is more complete. I also like the single color tone idea, but maybe you wanna try incorporating more black into it, to help break up the big bright areas. hope to see more!

Im really confused whats going on here lol

Zinbi: I dig the way that you used one color plus black and white for the comic. It looks really nice. The outline of your panels however, really pull me out of the comic. Its rather distracting looking at uneven and squiggly boxes. If you want to do hand drawn boxes, take the extra time to make sure that they line up. You do it on page 1, but page 3 and 4's boxes don't line up with each other. Storywise this definitely feels like an unfinished comic. Time management can be really hard, but its very important. good luck on future comics!

The color's fine.

I'm a big dummy and didn't finish, again. ): But on the upside, I tried some new stuff and feel pretty good about the forth page's set up, even if it's not finished. I hope the color is not too eye strain-y.

Extension GET!

Oooooo what an intersting matchup! I can't wait!

KILL HIM. KILL HIM DEAAAAAAAAAD.

HECK YEAH

Oh man, oh man, back in the comic battle game!