Thanks for the feedback so far. I had fun drawing some of the scenes in this one, but found that the brush pen wasn't cooperating like I wanted it to at some points. I'll have to keep practicing and maybe incorporate some other types of pens for inking.
Red: As far as the artwork, by beefing up do you mean more background detail or line quality?
Pyras: Yeah, I need to find a more fitting font, I agree.
The Plot Thickens, Part II / Stanley Martin
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# 4
Posted:
Jul 19 2017, 06:00 PM
# 3
Posted:
Jul 16 2017, 10:42 PM
Part II is lacking the charm of part I tbh, I'm glad you're building backstory but you need to work on beefing up that art too. Pyras mentioned the font, but I feel like you could have put a little more care into the comic overall? Looking forward to what you do next and I still think that Part I was super great. This was just a little lacking for me.
# 2
Posted:
Jul 16 2017, 10:19 PM
I would suggest a better font and the art is getting better if needing more work but MAN I am completely hooked on this fever dream of a plot
More please
More please
# 1
Posted:
Jul 1 2017, 08:40 PM
YEEEES!
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