Cavallero vs. Houma
Critiques & Comments
# 16
Posted:
Apr 26 2012, 12:26 AM
Willy D- Your inks have gotten heaps tighter lately, and your hard angles and trippy compositions are exactly the sort of thing I adore. Our styles are quite similar so I'm a tad biased towards digging your stuff. I think your pages are pretty clean and complex but trend towards simplicity towards the end as time ran out. Strive to maintain that consistency and you'll be aces.
# 15
Posted:
Apr 24 2012, 09:24 AM
napaea: Oi. I'm very sorry I was not able to upload anything, but my computer now doesn't even work unless I am in Safe Mode. When I get it fixed or get a new computer, I'll upload the comic. Sorry. :C
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# 14
Posted:
Apr 22 2012, 09:28 PM
I'm not entirely sure whats happening but the blacks and a lot of the angles are great.
# 13
Posted:
Apr 22 2012, 08:33 PM
I gave you all Nines William not because of the specifics of your story or creativity but because I opened this and though WOW he's improved. Being as I know how hard you worked to get to this LEVEL I can honestly say I think your drawing skill has finally caught up to your creative ideas. From what I can see here, it looks like you ran out of time to try and pull off a grandiose idea. I think you worked so much on each page that it took way longer than expected to complete. I've said "William Duel Sucks." in the past but this has made me rethink that. You've done well but now that you've raised the bar for yourself with this quality I hope you're ready to keep this consistent because that's really the hard part.
# 12
Posted:
Apr 22 2012, 04:22 PM
Will, I like all the different and ambitious angles and panels you tried for, but I'm not sure they always flow together. Case in point, the long panel of the hand reaching for that fellow's face is very odd, as it doesn't really interact with the rest of the page but still takes up about half of it. I also don't think you need the final white rectangle on that last page, unless you plan on adding something into it it's just distracting the eye. Let the black do what it's gonna do!
The inks are really nice,I agree, but I wish there was a bit more of a set up of where this is going on. An establishing shot of some kind to show the location and who all is there. Because I saw someone in the first page who I didn't perceive to be in the later pages ( the light haired bunny girl) and I get kind of confused as to where she is in all this. I am kind of worried about where the bubble layout will go to guide the eye through the page, especially on the first and second pages where panels take up so much room already and might make it look busy. If I was you, I might draw the page with the bubble placement in mind to help with composition.
Thanks for submitting, the work is looking nice. Just a few minor tweaks there.
The inks are really nice,I agree, but I wish there was a bit more of a set up of where this is going on. An establishing shot of some kind to show the location and who all is there. Because I saw someone in the first page who I didn't perceive to be in the later pages ( the light haired bunny girl) and I get kind of confused as to where she is in all this. I am kind of worried about where the bubble layout will go to guide the eye through the page, especially on the first and second pages where panels take up so much room already and might make it look busy. If I was you, I might draw the page with the bubble placement in mind to help with composition.
Thanks for submitting, the work is looking nice. Just a few minor tweaks there.
# 11
Posted:
Apr 22 2012, 09:11 AM
William: Hmmm, not quite sure what's going on, but the blacks are nice.
Napaea: Hope to definitely see what you had cooked up for this.
Napaea: Hope to definitely see what you had cooked up for this.
# 10
Posted:
Apr 22 2012, 01:21 AM
Oi. I'm very sorry I was not able to upload anything, but my computer now doesn't even work unless I am in Safe Mode. When I get it fixed or get a new computer, I'll upload the comic. Sorry. :C
# 9
Posted:
Apr 21 2012, 11:49 PM
Sorry. Excuses are cheap. I'm really very sorry but at the very least instead of defaulting I've put up what pages I managed to fully complete and when voting is over a complete version of this comic will go up.
# 8
Posted:
Apr 17 2012, 08:04 AM
interested in the outcome of this go go go!
# 7
Posted:
Apr 8 2012, 08:44 AM
Sweet. Thank you Angie!
# 6
Posted:
Apr 8 2012, 08:22 AM
An extension has been granted! No more extensions can be made
# 5
Posted:
Apr 7 2012, 11:41 PM
I think I could use an extension too, couldn't hurt at least.
# 4
Posted:
Apr 7 2012, 09:56 AM
So life's busy, yadda yadda and the next few days aren't any less busy. Could I request a week extension on this match?
# 3
Posted:
Apr 3 2012, 01:49 PM
Lookin' forward to this one, guys. <3
# 2
Posted:
Apr 1 2012, 07:13 PM
YAY A WILL FIGHT
# 1
Posted:
Mar 26 2012, 03:01 PM
Oh yes!
Good luck you two! >:3
Good luck you two! >:3
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
3 weeks
Ended:
Apr 28th, 2012
Votes Cast:
32
Page Views:
2196
Winner:
William_Duel
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4:00am, I know we have not seen eye to eye in the past, so your comment was shocking to me at first. Thanks a lot, man.