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THE INCUBATOR / Lyme's redesign hell
« on: Apr 08, 2018, 07:50 PM »
Im not sure if theres any unspoken rules for the "level of finished" that should be reached before making a post here, but after posting my latest wip in the discord i was encouraged to come post here -sooo here we goo.

Around 2-3 months ago I began designing this character for another site, one similar in content to entervoid. Between struggling with the design process, struggleing to learn how to write comics for the first time, losing my file that contained a 6 page comic wip, other major projects, and the poor quality of that other site's community -i lost interest in the project. Here are the major iterations of the character from the time period:
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Theres a lot still that im not showing, changes to major concepts and the like. From memory ive drawn nearly full ref sheets for a version that had a handgun + knife, some type of break-barrel rifle, some type of sword, some type of sword/gun combo, i could go on. Not to mention all the design work i did for all of those different kits in their own rite. I suppose what i am trying to say is that i'm fickle, to say the least. Perhaps more fickle than the average person? These changes wern't brought around by a want for something "more cool" but rather as attempts to find a character i can write more interesting action scenes around. None the less the project was abandoned, well, until i came across entervoid from from a tv-trops page on webcomic hosting sites yesterday, anyway.

Heres what i've got so far:

Ive progressed as an artist a bit since the previous drawings, so i'm doing (yet another) redesign of the character. One featuring more complex prosthetic arms (hes a human with alot of cyber augmentations) and wavey fabricy bits. Ive since settled on the gun-polearm-thing as well (yea its also a gun) Narrative wise im working from the ground up here still, as his narrative was deeply entwined in the lore of the other site i mentioned earlier, more to come on that!

lasty, some very very very early thumbnailing for the demo (which is guess is technically nsfw?):
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While i'm well aware its so very early on here, id still love to hear any crit you've got. Cheers.

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