Rtv! vs. Nameless
Critiques & Comments
# 27
Posted:
Mar 6 2011, 09:35 AM
Face structure was looking tighter here. nice setup but that's really all it was.
# 26
Posted:
Mar 5 2011, 12:29 AM
If the first colorful page is a set up, you could put some text there - just a quick "near future" or "RTV vs Nameless" would make it feel less empty.
Watercolory greys gives more depth, but you should also clean whites better - I don't know whenever it's a scanner problem or you just didn't had the time, but second page has a panel with only head and 3 sheets of paper flying around and cleaning his one wouldn't be so hard
I know that fourth wall breaking dialoque suppose to be funny, and it might work with all other characters being silent, but I can't shake off the feeling like it was due lack of better explanation to short story. I know you can make a great and complex story, which hurts when RTV breaks the character by saying fourth wall breaking comment - at least that's my opinion.
Watercolory greys gives more depth, but you should also clean whites better - I don't know whenever it's a scanner problem or you just didn't had the time, but second page has a panel with only head and 3 sheets of paper flying around and cleaning his one wouldn't be so hard
I know that fourth wall breaking dialoque suppose to be funny, and it might work with all other characters being silent, but I can't shake off the feeling like it was due lack of better explanation to short story. I know you can make a great and complex story, which hurts when RTV breaks the character by saying fourth wall breaking comment - at least that's my opinion.
# 25
Posted:
Mar 2 2011, 06:56 PM
Ah man, serious case of blue balls here, RTV. But nice looking, anyway!
# 24
Posted:
Feb 28 2011, 06:09 PM
Rtv, you do have some very nice inks, but I think you could mess with the contrast a bit more to make them look cleaner. There's not a whole lot to crit story-wise so I won't touch on that.
Any who, good luck in the next round!
Any who, good luck in the next round!
# 23
Posted:
Feb 28 2011, 03:47 PM
Man, I have to agree with Jho here, you have strong stand-alone blacks. I loved them
# 22
Posted:
Feb 28 2011, 02:39 PM
RTV, your comic just SCREAMS Wu Tang Clan. Even when dudes are getting copped up they're all standin round lookin cool. Vary up your angles, bro. Great first page though. Super moody.
# 21
Posted:
Feb 28 2011, 02:25 PM
Hahah, good one rtv! I agree with jho about the b+w of yours, i haven't seen straight lines in a long time from you and you've gotten really good at them.
Can't wait for us to get matched up again
Nicely done!
Njhinetc. sorry charlie~
Can't wait for us to get matched up again
Nicely done!
Njhinetc. sorry charlie~
# 20
Posted:
Feb 28 2011, 01:55 PM
I have to say i like your b/w stuff more than your coloured stuff, they look way clearer and readable.
# 19
Posted:
Feb 28 2011, 01:24 PM
RTV! That was some great mood building and then RTV opens his mouth and it was hilarious. Would've liked to seen finished fight, but it was cool none the less!
# 18
Posted:
Feb 28 2011, 01:23 PM
Almost made it a whole round with no defaults. It's cool man.
# 17
Posted:
Feb 28 2011, 01:03 PM
DEFAULT ON FIRST ROUND
I AM DISSAPOINT
I AM DISSAPOINT
# 16
Posted:
Feb 28 2011, 10:45 AM
hahahaha...okay that was pretty funny... good job RTV,
Nj..... I'm sad.
Nj..... I'm sad.
# 15
Posted:
Feb 27 2011, 08:39 AM
Make sure not to save your files at maximum quality RTV! Keep your files all below 500KB and you shouldn't have any issues with uploads tonight.
# 14
Posted:
Feb 18 2011, 12:28 AM
yeah...
# 13
Posted:
Feb 16 2011, 12:22 PM
hell yeah dudes, awesome!!
# 12
Posted:
Feb 14 2011, 03:09 PM
Wolcik: Njhinesjr don't try to hide behind awesme linework, do some solid plot like RTV will
Good luck guys!
Quote
I'll try not to hold back this time.
# 11
Posted:
Feb 14 2011, 03:09 PM
Wolcik: Njhinesjr don't try to hide behind awesme linework, do some solid plot like RTV will
Good luck guys!
Quote
I'll try not to hold back this time.
# 10
Posted:
Feb 14 2011, 08:18 AM
Don't disappoint! Looking forward to this
# 9
Posted:
Feb 14 2011, 07:55 AM
Man. This is a really good match up.
# 8
Posted:
Feb 14 2011, 06:10 AM
I really like Nameless' new design!
I'm excited to see you guys throw down.
I'm excited to see you guys throw down.
# 7
Posted:
Feb 14 2011, 04:57 AM
wow!
# 6
Posted:
Feb 14 2011, 03:41 AM
Njhinesjr don't try to hide behind awesme linework, do some solid plot like RTV will 
Good luck guys!
Good luck guys!
# 5
Posted:
Feb 14 2011, 12:02 AM
Nameless: You must be the one they call RTV! I have heard of you.
RTV!: Who the FUKK are you!!??
Nameless: Ah! You must have been expecting Goujin...
RTV!: Who the FUKK are you!!??
Nameless: Ah! You must have been expecting Goujin...
# 4
Posted:
Feb 13 2011, 10:53 PM
Congrats and good luck guys..... I'm rooting for you both! Hahahahhahahah
# 3
Posted:
Feb 13 2011, 10:53 PM
Interesting.
# 2
Posted:
Feb 13 2011, 10:11 PM
BLOOOOOD GOOOOORE
# 1
Posted:
Feb 13 2011, 09:58 PM
I expect nothing but a bloody mess from you two. <3
Comic Details
Tournament Match
Drawing Time:
2 weeks
Ended:
Mar 6th, 2011
Votes Cast:
46
Page Views:
2104
Winner:
Rtv!
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