Check Monty\'s profile. He\'s still alive i tell ya!

Respect!

IN VOID, EVERYONE\'S A WINNER. IT\'S PARADISE.

Winner: Agent Black AND Monty Chomps..

uuuuuuuuuuuh?

impressive stuff monday, especially given the time frame! good work

-J

Pretty neat battle!

Compared to your most recent work this is one of the easiest stuff to read you\'ve done, and when i mean easy, it\'s jus tthat the inks dont get in the way. Good touch on the colors.

Plotwise, personally the only thing that wasnt clear, but i got it anyway, was when he left the room, with the hole in the wall. The head explosion bit was quite cultural heheh, I love when there are cientific stuff included in awesome deeds. You could\'ve made more clear they were going THAT high, but it was fine through Monty\'s explanation.

Lysol: I SEE YOU IN HELL

Kickass comic Monday, I especially like the red panels on page 4, and the plane and missile dynamics. Great looking comic overall, some beautiful backgrounds in there.  
Suggestion-wise, watch the distance between Black\'s eyes, sometimes they get real close together and makes him look goofy.
A few of the angular panels had some jagged pixels going on, but I don\'t know if that\'s avoidable, because pixels hate diagonals.
1 last thing, I think I would have liked to see some more pulled back shots to tell the story at the end of page 9 and especially where he throws the knife into Monty on page 10.  All the close-ups made the action harder to follow for me.

Maybe you should death match more, cause this was awesome... in any case, keep up this prettiness.
There were just a few parts where I got confused; like when Black escapes from that room and then he\'s suddenly on the deck of the ship. I had to think about it before I realised Black had been on the ship the whole time... it just seemed like first Black was one place and then he was suddenly on the deck of some ship, and I kind of tripped up.
the lineart seems to have taken a big step up, although I still feel like it\'s kind of messy.. it\'s usually clear what\'s going on, though. I\'m also not sure how I feel about hand-written computer text..
Last nitpick; sometimes the text was a little bit squished in the bubbles; maybe if you had the bubbles overlap some panels?
I know they\'re small things, but it\'s all I got!

lysol... i no longer love you u.u

yheah I hate forshortening

Ahh Monday, your first pages were really, really, really... beautiful D: I just wanted to say that... hmm I suggest working on drawing arms though (something I too have trouble with) like on the first panel of page seven the character\'s arms look kind of wierd. ^^;

Really nice comic though, great stuff!

if the last page is what i think it is then all my suspicions about agent black might (not) be correct.

i didn\'t understand what happened at the end until anginess commented on how it\'s the explanation for black\'s chronic amnesia and now i get it and it blows my mind.
the anatomy gets wonky in some places, but i found everything to be crystal clear and thoroughly entertaining.
i usually prefer your traditional comics, but when you can throw down stunners like pages 1 and 2, i get all conflicted and such.

Monday - I really like how you\'re using your colors here, they really work for creating atmosphere.  The action was explosive and exciting, and the narrative quality was some of your cleanest yet.  I hafta say, though, that I really miss the insanity and the spattery-ness of your ink-on-dead-tree work.  I guess it\'s just a trade off for the clean-ness of digitals.  Overall, good work.  

Lysol - sir, tell me true: did you really run out of time, or did you just pull a \"Bibi Dov vs. Dean\" on us?  I\'m not judging, because I honestly don\'t care either way, I\'m just kinda wonderin\'.  

Lysol- Pot, kettle, black.

Monday- Like I told you before, this battle turned out to be one of your most cinematic. The quality in the first several pages were great, and I really enjoyed them. I think, correct me if I\'m wrong, that the high quality is because you just repeatedly fix mistakes until it looks right, which is something you can only do on the computer with time. That may be why your trads can look really odd sometimes- because you can\'t fix anything. Which, again, leads me to prod you into using pencils so you have more solid anatomy and proportion, haha.

The colors later in the battle were simple, but they really worked. While I love your b/w stuff, I think sticking with color will really suit your style- be it the simpler stuff later, or the paintery stuff in the beginning.

I really enjoyed the missile riding and the pressure death. Awesome.

That was such a richly drawn battle Monday - I think the colors are breathtaking. I didn\'t really mind that the art got a little rushed at the end - the first few pages are spectacular. I had to read through again to figure that Black was hopping onto the missile, but once the combatants were on top it was really cool.

LYSOL......................why .  sigh.  i cry but i guess i should have figured your heart is in character designing now.  

Monday - Loved the used of your machino-leg there, Monday. Very creative, if not somewhat nuts.  For the week deadline, I think you did well with the lines and such, but some of the story was a little more fragmented than your usual work.

Lysol - Awww, I wanted to see Black\'s head hit the stratosphere. Better luck next time though, I guess?

repetitiive critique is always welcome - as it will help gauge problems that are most common.

im impressed
keep it up monday
XD

Monday: I love those first few pages so much! I\'m always a fan of those colors put together. I can\'t knock you for things looking rushed, the deadline is understandable in this situation. I didn\'t quite get parts of the story though, things were a lil confusing in the panels (Like where they ended up on the bomb, what?). I think it was more-so the ending, I couldn\'t quite tell what was going on. Perhaps I\'m missing something though. One thing I notice in your figures is their heads always look so skinny/squished. I would add more width to them. They sometimes look childish and pointy anime chins in their features because of it.

Lysol: D= I am disappointed, but I\'ve totally been in your spot- me saying anything now would make me a hypocrite! No more spouting \"1 WEEK DEATHMATCHES\" for you though, maybe?

ALAS, we will never know Monty\'s side!

Good work, Monday! <3 I look forward to see what you\'re doing (On Void and off) in the future.

LYSOL YOU BASTARD.

monday, There\'ve aready been some very careful crits of your panels & colours, I just wanna say the first panel where they\'re both standing on the missle got an A for entertainment form me,  action packed!!
My heart aches for Monty, he was the character that I followed to Void from Deviantart in the first place. lysol, it\'s been a spectacular chapter.

Who defaults on a death match? What a dipshit.

Okay, who is surprised?  Anyone?  Anyone?  Bueller?  

Monday-I think this was a nice step up for you, although I wish the quality of the first pages would have stayed present throughout the whole battle, that happens when you\'re dealing with a week deadline. I would really like to see you continue to attempt color, I think it\'d really help you broaden your horizons. I really loved the 4th page, the red/black/white combo worked very well. For the most part I understood what was going on, but there were still times I was a little confused. Like it took a second to notice he had jumped on page 6 due to the size of the panels. I was a bit confused by what happened at the end, was that his clone? I know you said you were going to explain the memory loss situation and I guess that would be it? I did feel as if the last few pages were pretty rushed and that was probably the case, again considering the deadlines. Other than that it was a pretty solid entry from you, I\'m curious about where you\'re going to go from there.

hey, why is this on the news page if it wasn\'t even up...? >3>

the suspense!

Oh wow if Monty uploads his highquality work that he usually goes for then im screwwwed

If we don\'t vote, nobody will die.

C\'mon c\'monnnn- uploaaaaaad it for all to see! >:I

So, is this an extension? Or......

Well, either way, it\'ll be cool to NOT see one of the 2 awesome characters of void perishing and at the same time, it\'ll be awesome if this does come through and epic awesome rips everyone\'s spleen from their very bowls!

WHERE ARE YOU GUYSE

UGH EDITING STILL D:::

in about 4 hours i will be getting a massive hard-on followed by a stroke.

Good luck.

Yeah, I\'m with Neo on that one.  

Whoever loses will still live on. In our hearts. Or preferably as a zombie. That\'d be awesome!


If anyone defaults they have to kill themselves for real. Harsh but those are the rules.

D:

Why...? :\'(

YAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWN

KILL!

OMG! Agent Black, Death Match!? What will happen next. Love the Agent and I love Monty it will be tragic loss either way, good luck guys! This is gonna be amazing!

How about that poop? Can you guys do the stuff?

both are made of awesome... i see lysol on the disadvantage of time... and monday on the disdvantage of 100% clean clear work... both have snaztastic skills in their area of study... dude, this is going to be close. :3

Gasp! :0
this will be something to look forward too...
*grabs popcorn & steals somebody\'s soda*

If I had a willy mine would defiantly not be flaccid. Give it your all guys.

holy shit yes

This is rather exciting. I\'ll be looking forward to this.

My willy has just filled with 5 litres of blood :O

......

......

Where\'s the popcorn!?

Omigods
Good match-up!
The streets of Void will run red...

Well, looks like the end.

HURRAY!

If you die monday then thats IVAN AND BLACK! D:< DON\'T DO THIS TO ME JERKFACE!

HOLY SHEET!!!

Speed death match?
You crazy bitches!

Yippieeeee!

Wow...
I actually had to stop and stare for a few seconds just to make sure I wasn\'t seeing things.
Give a good battle, though I\'ll regret to see either of these guys dead.

ohshitshitohshits @_@

Monday and Lysol...the LAST death match up I expected. I am so stoked for this battle you don\'t even know. I\'m rooting for you both dagnabbit- make it awesome!

Welcome back to the stage of history.

everyone else basically summed it up. Make this spectacular, you two!

OH SHIT

epic

holy crap, this is intense

suspence, action, fish, and... well lets hope black doesnt forget who he\'s killing.  if he wins, VCPD will be on his ass, if monty wins lysol you have to battle more haha.  

good gravy!!

yes

Pedro\'s tears are flowing like waterfalls!  ;-;  

Better not die, Monday. You owe me a battle.

CRAP

what a twist!

gasp D: