Eny's very complex characters save me

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What is your opinion on my characters?

Too Complex
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Need Work
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Eny's very complex characters save me
« on: May 10, 2018, 09:13 AM »
egg

Ok so here's the place where I post my very weird characters with all the neon colors and stuff. I might make versions of each one that is less detailed for ease of effort haha.

Eny Lame : Rave Queen

She's a star nosed mole and is pretty cool. Loud and heavy edm makes her powerful so yeah.





« Last Edit: May 10, 2018, 10:10 AM by Eny-Lame »

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Re: Eny's very complex characters please help
« Reply #1 on: May 10, 2018, 09:19 AM »
egg 2

So this is my bootleg bill cipher.
He's actually a Triangulum which is an original species made by voidspacer.

SO he's a square yay.
pretty cool ah


This Triangulum usually spends his time working with metal and creating strange artwork. Although his handiwork can be dangerous, He often gets cut accidentally.
His Nickname is Zach.
Earth Elemental

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Re: Eny's very complex characters please help
« Reply #2 on: May 10, 2018, 09:25 AM »
egg 3
I know like fan based ocs aren't allowed but this one is just the least cringy out of them. She's also one of my oldest ocs heh

Just hear me out here. She's amazing. Let her liveee.

Name: Pippa Rudy Rothery
Age: 7
Species: Genetically and Mentally altered rabbit child
Weight: 51.5 lb
Height: 48.0"
Eye Color: Glowing Yellow
Handedness: Both
Theme Song: The Return- NIVIRO
Alignment: Chaotic neutral


Bio:
Born in the depths of Rapture, Pippa is one of the strange creatures referred to as “Little Sisters.” As her duties detail, she is to track and collect ADAM from the corpses littering the dead city. Her kind and fatherly partner that aids her is the fondly named Mr. Burble. Mr. Burble is a kind-hearted and protective Big Daddy. He was once  a large behemoth of a noble elephant; but, one misstep lead his flesh and bone to be grafted into a suit of armor and permanently modified to do the dirty repair work on the underwater cities frail walls. Her relationship with Burble is a precious one. Burble keeps her safe and sound while protecting her from the dangers of Rapture. One of the most fearful dangers is Jeremy Shivers.
Shivers is a Spider Splicer whose main interest is killing and collecting the large amount of ADAM Pippa has obtained. Luckily, with Burbles help, she is able to avoid death almost daily.



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Re: Eny's very complex characters please help
« Reply #3 on: May 10, 2018, 09:31 AM »
Also to the one person that voted on the poll for hoomans:

I do have a "human" character.

I'm not using him here because he's blatantly a Homestuck FC


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Re: Eny's very complex characters please help
« Reply #4 on: May 10, 2018, 09:37 AM »
I don't think they're too complex, pick whichever one you enjoy drawing the most. And yeah we do need to see some human anatomy.
You can take a look here for some resources http://entervoid.com/index.php?board=25.0
Specifically: http://entervoid.com/index.php?topic=12176.0 if you want some resources and places to practice.

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Re: Eny's very complex characters please help
« Reply #5 on: May 10, 2018, 09:39 AM »
I don't think they're too complex, pick whichever one you enjoy drawing the most. And yeah we do need to see some human anatomy.
You can take a look here for some resources http://entervoid.com/index.php?board=25.0
Specifically: http://entervoid.com/index.php?topic=12176.0 if you want some resources and places to practice.

Could I post something here to represent my work in human anatomy?

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Re: Eny's very complex characters please help
« Reply #7 on: May 10, 2018, 09:58 AM »
I don't think they're too complex, pick whichever one you enjoy drawing the most. And yeah we do need to see some human anatomy.
You can take a look here for some resources http://entervoid.com/index.php?board=25.0
Specifically: http://entervoid.com/index.php?topic=12176.0 if you want some resources and places to practice.

Could I post something here to represent my work in human anatomy?

Anywhere should be fine.
Here in your incubator, or your art thread, if you have one.

Also. The... Designs are not too complex. Just a tad... Hard on the eye.
Your first egg, Rave Queen give me a bit of a headache looking at the colors. Don't take this to heart, as I am only one person, but I don't think I'd enjoy seeing this character in comics, because of her colors.

Egg 2, don't blatantly state your character is a bootleg of that one dorito from that one show. Work on them so you can stop calling them as such. Seems you're already sabotaging yourself before even starting.

Egg 3, same as above. Inspiration is fine, and you seem aware of the "policy" of Fan Characters. Brainstorm a bit with this character as well, to give them an origin that is... Well, original.


From what I can gather, Homestuck, Gravity Falls, and Bioshock seem to be your inspiration for these characters. And that's pretty cool, getting ideas from other stories is always a nice idea to forge your own stuff. I do hope my comment doesn't discourage you.


Lastly, welcome to VOID.


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Re: Eny's very complex characters please help
« Reply #8 on: May 10, 2018, 10:10 AM »
I appreciate the critique Dechado! It's always hard to find someone who critiques like this It helps a lot. Some people are scared to critique correctly I guess.

If it helps I can make a version on Eny without as much saturation for people who don't want to draw her and be blinded.

And most of me stating the character being something is from experience. People call my characters copies of others even when they aren't.

As for human anatomy, I whipped up a few pieces to show off what I can do. It's not the best but it was worth it.


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Re: Eny's very complex characters save me
« Reply #9 on: May 10, 2018, 10:12 AM »
I have WAY more human drawings some where in my notebooks but I have nothing to take pictures with... except a bad flip phone. I can't afford a touch phone rn ;w;

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Re: Eny's very complex characters save me
« Reply #10 on: May 10, 2018, 10:14 AM »
I have WAY more human drawings some where in my notebooks but I have nothing to take pictures with... except a bad flip phone. I can't afford a touch phone rn ;w;

Well. Take this as a chance to challenge yourself to draw a human directly on the computer. That way we can see what is your current skill when it comes to humans. ;)

I also don't think a touch phone will make the sketches any good either. Get yourself a scanner, or go to an internet cafe to scan your notebooks.

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Re: Eny's very complex characters save me
« Reply #11 on: May 10, 2018, 10:18 AM »
Here's some other things.

Mostly hands and legs but not faces heh.





And you're right I probably should find a scanner. I might have one laying around in my house...
« Last Edit: May 10, 2018, 12:32 PM by Eny-Lame »

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Re: Eny's very complex characters save me
« Reply #12 on: May 10, 2018, 10:55 AM »
Might only be my side. But I can't see anything...

It's just a blank space haha...

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Re: Eny's very complex characters save me
« Reply #13 on: May 10, 2018, 10:56 AM »


I'm working on actually putting work into her intro since It got declined.

(Obviously I rushed the intro. Sorry.)

Also Dechado. I see them.

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Re: Eny's very complex characters save me
« Reply #14 on: May 10, 2018, 12:08 PM »
Yeah, the site you're using for those images isn't big on hotlinking, I don't think. It says I can't view them until I log in. So, you should probably reupload them on imgur or somewhere else.

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Re: Eny's very complex characters save me
« Reply #15 on: May 10, 2018, 12:10 PM »
Oghh
I see. I'll fix them asap

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Re: Eny's very complex characters save me
« Reply #16 on: May 10, 2018, 12:33 PM »


Can you see this?

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Re: Eny's very complex characters save me
« Reply #17 on: May 10, 2018, 12:52 PM »
Also small update.

I am planning on finding a new program to work with. I currently use MSpaint. Yeah. MSpaint. It's what I grew up with and I've never really used anything else. I have 2 tablets and Clip Paint Studio as well. Currently I cannot use either because my laptop right now is having issues. I am planning on getting a Desktop soon. Once that happens expect a huge change in art style. My art will look less pixelated and less mouse drawn like it is right now.

Also i plan on heading to my local library tonight to test out the 3 most suggested apps from the mods, Krita, Gimp, and Firealapaca.
I have a bit of experience with all three already actually. I used to use Krita to shade/detail my MSpaint art. Then It started to crash and I'd lose work.

I will try to redo all that I made so far and really make it shine and sparkle (literally.)

And I apologize to the mods for making them write all of the explanations on what I did wrong.

*Sweats*

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Re: Eny's very complex characters save me
« Reply #18 on: May 10, 2018, 01:07 PM »
hey no worries thats what the approval committee is for, glad to see you arent discouraged! just keep at it and you'll get a version you're proud of that we can be happy to accept!
We still cant see the images youre hosting =T Maybe get a Deviantart Stash or use imgur, then right click the image and "copy image address" to use as your image link.
I still like your raver mole personally because blacklight is my aesthetic~ I'd look up some refs for that to make that a little less eye bleedy. In fact, heck, we got an art jam for it you could practice in http://entervoid.com/index.php?topic=13380.0
Keep at it! I hope you get a chance to use the art programs we recommended!

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Re: Eny's very complex characters save me
« Reply #19 on: May 11, 2018, 08:00 AM »
If you all didn't see on discord:

I'm redoing the entire comic. This new one will hopefully be better!

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Re: Eny's very complex characters save me
« Reply #20 on: May 11, 2018, 01:01 PM »
Wip


It'll have text and I also decided that Eny will be a villain!
« Last Edit: May 11, 2018, 01:04 PM by Eny-Lame »

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Re: Eny's very complex characters save me
« Reply #21 on: May 11, 2018, 09:26 PM »
Good luck with the comic! Even though you've just started, I recommend that you zoom out on some panels so that there's more breathing room and everything looks less cramped/cluttered, and your text bubbles don't interrupt other panels by sticking into them as well if there's more space.

 

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