Nibbles vs. GPS-Device

Nibbles vs. GPS-Device

by Nibbles

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Rose
Web Dev
1180 comments
# 10   Posted: Dec 27 2016, 05:52 PM
Geeps, you cockteased me and now I'm mad. I was so into this comic, and the colors were gorgeous! I need more ;-;

Rhimwill
Artist
97 comments
# 9   Posted: Dec 27 2016, 05:07 PM
GPS: You did a really nice job on the environments – both the more natural-looking planets and asteroids and the grungy control room. One thing that stood out to me is that the characters' hands are very big. They're nicely drawn, it's obvious you put a lot of care into drawing them, but they're just a bit too large in relation to the rest of the body. I really love the color scheme your using, and man that is a really nicely drawn space suit on those first two pages. Obviously, the story isn't finished here, but what you've got so far really caught my attention and makes me want to read more ^_^

zee
Artist
132 comments
# 8   Posted: Dec 27 2016, 04:54 PM
GPS -
Really digging this style!
I love the soft colors but I think perhaps some of the characters don't stand out from the background quite enough? Maybe it's just me.
Either way this is really nice, can't wait to see more!

PyrasTerran
Artist
1512 comments
# 7   Posted: Dec 27 2016, 02:40 PM
GPS-Device: this new style of yours that we've seen in your webcomics and other works is really charming though it does do a lot to hide some of your anatomy weaknesses, they're still there, but you're an artist who always seems to be pushing themselves to improve so I'm confident you'll hammer out those weaknesses eventually.

petarvee
Artist
83 comments
# 6   Posted: Dec 24 2016, 09:14 PM
@GPS While I love the level of detail on the moon, the suits, the cute characters, and all the dialouge and interactions and basically all that's there, I gotta wonder---Wheres The Rest Of It. I know you're doing a page a week for your webcomic and you've got A Real Man's Job, but now's a great time to figure out how to really up your speed, especially for something as highly anticipated as this.

Fred
Artist
550 comments
# 5   Posted: Dec 21 2016, 01:15 PM
Well, I want more, this is a great little taster. I find the blues and greens in the control room to lack some contrast, especially when you compare them to the soft yet strong colours of first pages. Good stuff, good stuff.

GPS-Device
Artist
124 comments
# 4   Posted: Dec 21 2016, 11:00 AM
Due to some issues in my hand, I wasn't able to get nearly as much done as I'd planned, but hopefully what I could still gives something decent to show

Radji
Artist
623 comments
# 3   Posted: Dec 21 2016, 10:17 AM
@Nibbles: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

@GPS: SILENCE RADIO DAMNIT !!! poor guy must have popped an artery here, hahahaha. as always, i love the colors !

otakutaylor
Artist
183 comments
# 2   Posted: Nov 12 2016, 01:45 PM
Oooooooo this is gonna be good~

Nibbles
Artist
194 comments
# 1   Posted: Nov 12 2016, 06:33 AM
Okay.  I've got a "disaster movie" pilot thing written.  Based on a "prophetic" nightmare I had in college. Time to thumbnail.

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