Actually, I think Mokuu was a bit harsh here.  ^^;  

I think that the anatomy wasn\'t perfect, but it works with this style.  I loved the coloring and the shading, but Kate\'s tech-suit kind of blended into the dark background on the first few pages.  The paneling got a little clumsy in places, but nothing was really a deal-breaker.  

Kate doesn\'t come across as a very likeable (or believable) character here, but she does in your normal battles.  It seemed like you were streatching her personality a bit in order to get some fight scenes.  The fight scenes WERE really cool, though.  

In a nutshell: liked the artwork a lot, and the story wasn\'t terribly interesting, but it was told pretty well.  

what happened in page 10???

Thanks Mokuu, it\'s pretty hard to get critiques on BBs for some reason.  I do see where you\'re going with most of that, I\'ll keep it in mind.

*looks at the comments above*

*takes a deep breath*

I hated it, the movements felt broken since most of your characters have extremely thin limbs, work on the female anatomy a bit more, the coloring completely ruined the whole thing for me since your color selection had no particular contrast element: a major part of your figures were blending with the background especially in page 6. Your shading only tried to bring out your figure\'s forms but made them worst at the same time since it broke the forms, it really didnt follow your line work. Your paneling had good intentions but went \"all around the place\" it didn\'t have a clean, structured form. As for the story, i don\'t know, maybe its a personal thing, i didn\'t catch any shock factor, surprises, interesting story elements, i just saw that main girl childishly attacking other people just for the fun of it. Now you\'ve introduced other characters but you aren\'t expending their actual use in the story, they don\'t really do much nor there isnt much info on their backgrounds or relations. Sure i know you\'re probably gonna refer me to their battles and pages and i WAS going to do so, IF you brought a plot factor interesting enough for me to check these references. Exemple, RTV\'s storyline with Gum and Esterella had me going through both their battles and backgrounds because of how involved these character were in his storyline.

Anyway, just opinions, no need to take em seriously if you dont want to, thats just my P.O.V.

\'somehow\' he says. mamoru, you don\'t know the half of it. :3

well, that\'s two outfits ruined for kale... next up is her actual outfit from the design sheet...

i know i already said this (i got a sneak peak on this earlier), but still, great work bro.

Excellent Kommerade, pure excellence.

The experiments your doing work quite well, most especially since I see more vibrant colors in your entry than before.

Also storywise I am very impressed since somehow your entry has managed to connect a lot of stuff, most especially with the thing the Horizon group is planning.

Keep it up Kommerade, glad to see your entries

This is wonderful!! I loved the comic, very good action bits and the coloring was very nice, lighting wise it didn\'t get too dark for me but I\'m using a laptop so it might be too dark for users with desktop monitors but that\'s nothing a little tweaking with the brightness can\'t fix, overall t he quality of the comic was top notch, kudos!

<3 your style

So um, this is going to connect to some BB work from Slade, which should hopefully go up soon.

This was going to be for a certain Kate vs Paige, but stuff happened there so I decided to experiment with lighting effects.  I wonder if it got too dark at times though.