Light Speed Death Tournament, Round 1 / Dyna and the Gal vs. The Demon Gu
Critiques & Comments
# 14
Posted:
Jan 22 2016, 08:09 PM
MINTEH- I'll have you know I took one look at that first panel when you shared it in discord chat and immediately said, "Damn I gotta step up my game." Some real nice detail going on these panels. REAL nice. Its only a taste, but I already like where this little gal is going. Can't wait to see your round 2
# 13
Posted:
Jan 22 2016, 01:48 PM
MINT: From your bio I wouldn't have picked that Tammy was meant to be like an old-god sort of thing so I'm just interested if this matchup changed your character direction a little? If so I think that's really cool haha. The inks and tones on this are SO nice but yeah as you've mentioned in chat you need to find a new way of doing bubbles and some of the lettering where it's gotten pixelated (for me, I draw them at the same time/in the same way as everything else I do but I can get if that's not working for you especially under time constraint - hope the advice you got from peeps in chat helps). This was a great, funny story and I love the pay off with the joke at the end. Nice work.
THRESH: Sabu's plans when it comes to taking your eviscerating you usually involve my house please go underground until she forgets cos I need my security deposit back and I'm not sure the bloodstains will help me there.
THRESH: Sabu's plans when it comes to taking your eviscerating you usually involve my house please go underground until she forgets cos I need my security deposit back and I'm not sure the bloodstains will help me there.
# 12
Posted:
Jan 22 2016, 07:14 AM
Mint: Goooood you've improved so much!!
Thresher: sob. Hope you get better!
Thresher: sob. Hope you get better!
# 11
Posted:
Jan 21 2016, 09:41 PM
Ah... so it was almost death before default for realsies. s: I'm glad you're doing ok Thresh, too bad bout the lack of comic but your health's much more important. Get better soon.
Minteh this was an entertaining comic and I really like the way you inciorporated Gu into Tammy's world.
Minteh this was an entertaining comic and I really like the way you inciorporated Gu into Tammy's world.
# 10
Posted:
Jan 21 2016, 08:14 PM
Mint, that was an engaging read. The clean crisp lineart and the characterizations of the characters is pure entertainment. I'm eagerly awaiting what you can do on the next rounds. Keep at it!
Thresher: Life is just a bowl of cherries.
Thresher: Life is just a bowl of cherries.
# 9
Posted:
Jan 21 2016, 02:56 PM
Fucking hell Mints hahaa. I love how your art got a lot cleaner man, I really do like this a lot. Work on those text bubbles though! The story was really funny
# 8
Posted:
Jan 21 2016, 02:31 PM
Can I just say how much I love Old God Toddler
# 7
Posted:
Jan 21 2016, 11:30 AM
Light Speed Critique: Minteh, excellent detail and form both in characters and in backgrounds. Do watch the word bubles though, the bubbles and outlines of tails and large letters ended up pixelated looking. Thresh, You aren't immortal enough, work on that. Get well soon!
# 6
Posted:
Jan 21 2016, 08:08 AM
Minteh - That last panel is priceless. I actually think this is some of your better art as well, you're really coming along nicely. Good stuff bro.
Greg - Man, that's a shame, I was really looking forward to some Gu. Oh well, shit happens, get better so I can enjoy your kidneys properly.
Greg - Man, that's a shame, I was really looking forward to some Gu. Oh well, shit happens, get better so I can enjoy your kidneys properly.
# 5
Posted:
Jan 20 2016, 06:27 PM
Hey Thresh, don't worry about it! Hoping for your speedy recovery!
My stuff's uploaded!
My stuff's uploaded!
# 4
Posted:
Jan 20 2016, 04:33 PM
Sorry minteh I've been ill the past week and unable to eat. Not had the energy to do much of anything beyond sleep. Still a bit under, losing kidneys won't help.
Sorry I couldn't do more
Sorry I couldn't do more
# 3
Posted:
Jan 17 2016, 11:14 AM
GL Thresher, I'm not kind enough to spare your kidneys
# 2
Posted:
Jan 17 2016, 09:05 AM
Greg if you lose I'll buy those kidneys from Sabulive and eat them
# 1
Posted:
Jan 17 2016, 02:28 AM
Good luck you two!
Thresh, if you lose Ill stab u and sell ur kidneys on the black market
Mintley, if you lose its ok, you did ur best and im proud of you <3
Thresh, if you lose Ill stab u and sell ur kidneys on the black market
Mintley, if you lose its ok, you did ur best and im proud of you <3
Speed Death Tournament Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Jan 23rd, 2016
Votes Cast:
36
Page Views:
1494
Winner:
Minteh
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