DESI- You got some great visuals (love those expressions!) and tasty color choices, but I honestly don't know whats happening. Maybe that's par for the course when it comes to kids? They do ramble and lord knows my nephew makes 0 sense sometimes. But even so, for a comic narratively it doesnt work. The scene transition and order or actions don't seem to have a rhyme or reason. I feel you tried to go for one liners from the kids page to page, but the pay offs don't quite hit the mark.

FRED- You have such a knack for using off the wall colors in a way that makes them feel so natural. Like, I don't even notice they live in a lavender world and that should be weird. You make it acceptable and I dig that. This comic was short, sweet and the chuckle I expected for a 1 week comic.Definitely hope you do more of these. They seem to be fast becoming the amuse bouche of void!

Fred, Desi! Love the quality of both these comics! Both your colors are used superbly!

desi- your colors really stood out! Beautiful! Word bubbles tripped me up a little on first page though. Your style is evolving into something very promising, I love this! You could work on making your words a bit more clear to read though. Great job!

fred- the simplicity and space lets me breathe. Its a little short though.

Honestly a big fan of both comics for different reasons.

Desi: your workethic continues to impress me and being able to deliver 3 fully colored pages in one day? Mad props. Your one of the few with those capabilities. Be damn proud about that. Also, for a one day comic, your panel composition and flow is coming along nicely, as is your backgrounds. All around a good job, especially since you did this in one day + another comic. Your an absolute madwoman.

Fred: I loe the colors, I love the feel of the comic. Its clean, the story is a cute effective story about the woes of the teacher/babysitter.

Desi: these 3 full colored pages in one day are crazy desi, really good job with them I also like the backgrounds, you did alot under such a short time span with them so good job. In terms of story I really enjoy all the characterization and dialogue, you're good at writing characters and did well with lucy without knowing anything about her beforehand. However In terms of pacing i would like to see more transitions between plot elements which will likely result in including less plot elements in the story, which is fine. I think it stems from you describing the events using "And then" when you describe events that way things will just go into one another and the reader will struggle to follow. There's a lot going on and when you quickly move from one event to the other without a proper bridge the reader gets stuck on the last thing and can't progress forward. For example I wasn't sure about the whole thing with secret identities confused me, I wasn't sure why they needed secret identity or what their new identities were. Before i could figure that out you then add the element of them just suddenly disappearing because of some reason I know you have an explanation for. However I couldn't appreciate the disappearance as much as you would like me to because i was still on the secret identity things. You have a lot of good ideas and interesting stuff I want to know more about, you should have some more faith in your ideas and take more time to individually explore them as well as work to bridge them together more smoothly. The pacing in the first page was pretty good as it mainly focused on the one thing of them going trick or treating and I like that and want to see more similar to that.

fred: This was a cute short story and I love the muted palette you had in this, how did you choose the colors for this? really good job for a one day comic, after following up the surprise comic you did.

Wow, im gonna have to come back to this after i'm done with my battle, but I love both of these! ❤️❤️

Good stuff from both of you.

ONE DAY HAS PASSED
THIS COMIC IS READY TO GO UP

Finished and submitted. Good luck Fred on the final 13 hours!

O good luck both of you

Let's do dis!