Oh woe is worm / Wictor
Critiques & Comments
# 5
Posted:
Mar 12 2018, 05:34 PM
This is super cute and I'm really enjoying this weird friendship between these two. The comedic timing in this is spot-on XD
# 4
Posted:
Mar 12 2018, 04:33 PM
So stoked to see you guys working together.
I will say (though I do love dark colors) there wasn't quite enough color contrast here, which left a lot of the scenes too dark to properly follow, but this is just something to keep in mind for future comics.
This was a nice little interaction overall; both of the characters have such seemingly volatile personalities I was surprised by the relative peacefulness of it, ha ha.
Wonderful job you two, can't wait for more from you both!
I will say (though I do love dark colors) there wasn't quite enough color contrast here, which left a lot of the scenes too dark to properly follow, but this is just something to keep in mind for future comics.
This was a nice little interaction overall; both of the characters have such seemingly volatile personalities I was surprised by the relative peacefulness of it, ha ha.
Wonderful job you two, can't wait for more from you both!
# 3
Posted:
Mar 9 2018, 04:21 PM
That was cute and goofy and how all the colors blended together nicely with even the night having a slight orange to match Niles' orange was a nice touch!
# 2
Posted:
Mar 8 2018, 11:05 AM
With all the large-scale events and deaths going on in Void, I love comics like these that focus on just simple character interactions and events. A look into an ordinary day in the life of a Void citizen.
I enjoy this introduction of how Niles and Wictor meet. Their banter is cute and amusing. This is a great stepping stone for what I'm sure will be more interactions and adventures for the two of them. Of which I can't wait to see!
My only points of critique are that the comic is dark. I'd love it if it was just brightened up a tad, OR if the colorist pushed the lightsource a bit more so that it would illuminate the figures and some of the background more.
All in all, great comic, and I can't wait to see more! You two work well together.
I enjoy this introduction of how Niles and Wictor meet. Their banter is cute and amusing. This is a great stepping stone for what I'm sure will be more interactions and adventures for the two of them. Of which I can't wait to see!
My only points of critique are that the comic is dark. I'd love it if it was just brightened up a tad, OR if the colorist pushed the lightsource a bit more so that it would illuminate the figures and some of the background more.
All in all, great comic, and I can't wait to see more! You two work well together.
# 1
Posted:
Mar 7 2018, 08:51 PM
I really enjoyed seeing these two's banter, and I really enjoyed all that random touching, when Niles is just like... "Huh." It was neat, and a fun read!! Glad to see more of these kiddos!
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