I'm in for the kings tournament with regi! (And gwen)

I started early! To be continued when i wake up and start taking notes tomorrow. Hopefully this will be enough to convince anyone who's on the fence about this to try it out! Also, hopefully this is readable, should have made sure before i uploaded it, good luck with that!

wei's larger than before and the bony protrusions in his arms and back grow bigger and begin to sprout from his head and the tentacles on his back. would do anything for a hot cuppa.

Yes purease

Better stick with gwen+regi!

I just picked up smash...!
My code thingie is 0447 7670 6278!

Ms. Clean in a french maid outfit... how has this not been done yet??



Raygun wants to share with you... be polite!


(his hand's supposed to look like it's in his back pocket)

i used to do a journal comic thing on tumblr. here's the most recent one:

i started reading your comic... like these characters, they're pretty appealing! i agree with wei that there could be more backgrounds, i saw you were adding them more in your recent comic on tumblr but it needs more regularity to hold the page together. i think the biggest improvement you could make would be to have a better way to draw the bodies. you obviously know how to draw your characters faces, because that's where the best lines are, but the bodies are all pretty similar and pretty sketchy, so a light underdrawing would definitely help for that. figure out what it'll look like, and then use the nice swoopy lines for those. plus the bodies are always the same shape, the best example is in the picture with the characters holding on to koko on the broom, jodo's shoulders are horizontal, they should be more vertical because of how he's holding on. i can tell you're passionate about comics! i'll keep reading.

pretty much just suzi-x and murray the robot from el superbeasto:


(the tamest screenshot i found...)

Sorry about the drop in quality, bad time for my tablet to break... i colored this with the mouse.



The creatures begin to spend their lives in wide, slow moving rivers. Whereas previous generations spent their lives on the muddy bottom, they now begin to swim in the currents near the grassy bottom of the lake after they reach adulthood. Its body and snout have gotten longer and the protrusions on its back help it to blend into the riverweed, where they slowly drift around. The creature stays mostly stationary (especially when there are predators about) but it will vigorously defend its eggs which are camouflaged as stones. It uses its webbed back legs for propulsion and dredges the river bottom to stir up food, which it gobbles up with its trunk. It still feeds primarily on bugs and algae but some mutations will eat small passing fish.

I guess those are little incense lamp thingies...

that's looking pretty nice so far! but i'll say the background in the first and second panels might need to be a bit stronger. also a bit nit picky but the demon guy in the last panel should probably be a bit more in the foreground, he seems a little small right now. looking forward to seeing the rest of your pages!

lilyfeatherrr!